Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I know you really like it because actually I don't have a lot of friends as much, so I would prefer spend my time doing another activities like watching the films or doing uh, like pantries.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I often jog with my friends about studying because they we find it very hard and we have a lot of problems in this. So we usually talk about it and we often give each other examples to let others understand more about the problems and we can solve the problems that we have made.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel like I'm feel OK and enough with grandfather because they can understand me much more than when children group because they just feel like just have some jazz for chit chat and they don't have relatives start conversation like with 1 friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face conversations because it can have you transform all the information that you really want to the others understand you easily. So for example, I really want to talk about a guys and I need help so I need a real conversation instead of social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not actually arguing with friends regularly because I will try to avoid some, just some like misunderstanding and I will try to speak clearly, uh, what I want to talk and I don't want that the misunderstanding. So my friends are really have, uh, misunderstanding with me so we don't argue.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I don't like chatting with friends much because I don't have many friends. I prefer spending my time watching movies or doing other activities.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about studying because we find it difficult. Therefore, we share examples to help each other understand and solve problems.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh những câu không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable and understood than in a group, where conversations can be less meaningful.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express myself clearly. For example, if I need advice about a guy, I prefer talking in person rather than through social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp.
Ví dụ: No, I don't often argue with friends because I try to avoid misunderstandings by speaking clearly. This helps us maintain good relationships.
× No, I know you really like it because actually I don't have a lot of friends as much, so I would prefer spend my time doing another activities like watching the films or doing uh, like pantries.
✓ No, I know you really like it because actually I don't have many friends, so I would prefer to spend my time doing other activities like watching films or doing, uh, like painting.
The phrase 'a lot of friends as much' is incorrect; 'many friends' is the correct quantifier for countable nouns like 'friends'. Also, 'another activities' should be 'other activities' because 'another' is used with singular nouns. 'Prefer spend' should be 'prefer to spend' to correctly use the infinitive form after 'prefer'. 'Watching the films' should be 'watching films' as 'films' is plural and general here. 'Doing uh, like pantries' seems to be a mispronunciation or misuse; likely intended 'painting'.
× I often jog with my friends about studying because they we find it very hard and we have a lot of problems in this.
✓ I often talk with my friends about studying because we find it very hard and we have a lot of problems with it.
The phrase 'jog with my friends about studying' is incorrect; 'jog' is a physical activity and does not fit the context. It should be 'talk'. Also, 'they we find' is a pronoun confusion; it should be 'we find' to maintain subject consistency.
× So we usually talk about it and we often give each other examples to let others understand more about the problems and we can solve the problems that we have made.
✓ So we usually talk about it and often give each other examples to help others understand the problems better and solve the problems we have.
The phrase 'let others understand more about the problems' is awkward; 'help others understand the problems better' is more natural. Also, 'problems that we have made' is incorrect; 'problems we have' or 'problems we face' is better.
× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel like I'm feel OK and enough with grandfather because they can understand me much more than when children group because they just feel like just have some jazz for chit chat and they don't have relatives start conversation like with 1 friend.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel okay and comfortable with one person who can understand me much more than a group of children, who just seem to have casual chit-chat and don't start meaningful conversations like one friend does.
The sentence has multiple issues: 'I'm feel OK and enough with grandfather' is incorrect; 'I feel okay and comfortable with one person' is better. 'Grandfather' seems out of context; likely meant 'one person' or 'a friend'. 'Children group' should be 'a group of children'. 'They just feel like just have some jazz for chit chat' is unclear; 'they just seem to have casual chit-chat' is clearer. 'They don't have relatives start conversation like with 1 friend' is incorrect; 'they don't start meaningful conversations like one friend does' is better.
× I prefer to communicate face to face conversations because it can have you transform all the information that you really want to the others understand you easily.
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows you to convey all the information you really want so that others can understand you easily.
'Communicate face to face conversations' is incorrect; 'communicate face-to-face' is the correct phrase. 'It can have you transform all the information' is awkward; 'it allows you to convey all the information' is better. 'That you really want to the others understand you easily' is ungrammatical; 'so that others can understand you easily' is correct.
× So for example, I really want to talk about a guys and I need help so I need a real conversation instead of social media.
✓ So for example, I really want to talk about a guy and I need help, so I need a real conversation instead of social media.
'Talk about a guys' is incorrect; 'a guy' is singular and correct here. Also, a comma before 'so' improves clarity.
× No, I'm not actually arguing with friends regularly because I will try to avoid some, just some like misunderstanding and I will try to speak clearly, uh, what I want to talk and I don't want that the misunderstanding.
✓ No, I don't actually argue with friends regularly because I try to avoid misunderstandings and I try to speak clearly about what I want to say, and I don't want any misunderstandings.
'I'm not actually arguing' should be 'I don't actually argue' to express habitual action. 'I will try' is future tense and not appropriate here; 'I try' is better for habitual actions. 'Some, just some like misunderstanding' is incorrect; 'misunderstandings' plural is correct. 'I want to talk' should be 'what I want to say'. 'I don't want that the misunderstanding' is ungrammatical; 'I don't want any misunderstandings' is correct.
× So my friends are really have, uh, misunderstanding with me so we don't argue.
✓ So my friends really don't have misunderstandings with me, so we don't argue.
'Are really have' is incorrect; 'really don't have' is correct. 'Misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' to indicate multiple instances.