Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love chatting with my friends. I can recharge my energy by spending time with them. They would like to give me some useful advice when I am confronted with some difficult problems. That's the reason why I would like to communicate with them.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat with my friends about our love story or some difficulties we are confronted with umm. Sometimes I would like to share my boyfriend about his characteristics or personalities umm.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I would like to chat with only one friend. Once I talked with a group of people, they would like to discuss my situation or condition for many times, but once I talked to him.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat face to face instead of umm chatting online. Umm chatting face to face. UMM can be interactive but chatting online can be.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Never arguing with friends is not beneficial to my relationship between them. Umm, I would like to suggest to them to intermediate and deal with our conflict.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但部分表达略显重复,且句子结构较简单。建议避免重复表达相似意思,尝试使用更多连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and gain new perspectives. Moreover, they often offer valuable advice when I face challenges, which I find very helpful.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,且有口头语“umm”影响流畅度。建议加强语法准确性,避免口头语,并且使内容更具体和连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about our relationships and personal challenges. For instance, I often share stories about my boyfriend's personality traits and how we support each other.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够完整且表达不清,句子结构混乱,缺少连接词。建议明确表达观点,使用完整句子,并用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows for deeper and more focused conversations. In contrast, group chats can sometimes be overwhelming and less personal.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有大量口头语,表达不完整且不连贯。建议减少口头语,使用完整句子,并清晰表达理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more interactive and allows me to read facial expressions, which is difficult when chatting online.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰,语法错误较多,且有口头语。建议使用正确语法,避免口头语,并清楚表达观点。
Ví dụ: I try to avoid arguments with my friends because they can harm our relationship. Instead, I prefer to discuss issues calmly and find a compromise.
× Sometimes I would like to share my boyfriend about his characteristics or personalities umm.
✓ Sometimes I would like to share with my boyfriend about his characteristics or personalities.
动词share后面需要加介词with,表示“与某人分享”,缺少介词导致表达不完整。
× Once I talked with a group of people, they would like to discuss my situation or condition for many times, but once I talked to him.
✓ Once I talked with a group of people, they would like to discuss my situation or condition many times, but once I talked to him.
短语“for many times”不符合英语习惯,应改为“many times”表示多次。
× I prefer to chat face to face instead of umm chatting online.
✓ I prefer to chat face-to-face instead of umm chatting online.
短语“face to face”作为形容词或副词时应连字符连接,写作“face-to-face”。
× Never arguing with friends is not beneficial to my relationship between them.
✓ Never arguing with friends is not beneficial to my relationship with them.
短语“relationship between them”用法不当,应改为“relationship with them”,表示“我和他们之间的关系”。
× Umm, I would like to suggest to them to intermediate and deal with our conflict.
✓ Umm, I would like to suggest to them to mediate and deal with our conflict.
动词“intermediate”用法错误,正确动词应为“mediate”,表示“调解”。此外,动词suggest后接不定式时不需要介词to。