Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends because sharing the interesting things with them is a good way to show my opinions.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I often talk about the travel place with my friends, we talk about we chat with the living room, the living and. Shizam.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with a group of people because different people have different opinions. We can we can trans transport our opinions and in enhance our level.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face. In this way I can offer observation to others and obtain reflection.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
I have to argue with my friends because of a little misunderstanding about something, but we survived the programs instantly.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然,建议使用更地道的表达方式,并避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share interesting experiences and express my thoughts openly.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰且语法错误较多,建议回答时注意句子结构和表达的连贯性,提供具体话题。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about travel destinations, sharing our experiences and planning future trips together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和表达不准确的问题,建议简洁明了地表达观点,并使用恰当的词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group because it brings diverse opinions, which helps me learn and improve my understanding.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,词汇使用不当,建议使用更地道的表达方式并补充具体原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe body language and get immediate feedback.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答语法和用词错误较多,表达不清晰,建议用简单明了的句子描述经历。
Ví dụ: Sometimes I argue with my friends due to small misunderstandings, but we always resolve them quickly.
× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because sharing the interesting things with them is a good way to show my opinions.
✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because sharing interesting things with them is a good way to show my opinions.
这里不需要在interesting前加定冠词the,因为interesting things是泛指,去掉the更自然。
× I often talk about the travel place with my friends, we talk about we chat with the living room, the living and. Shizam.
✓ I often talk about travel places with my friends.
原句中存在语义混乱和多余词汇,travel place前不需要定冠词the,且living room等词语不合适,应简化为talk about travel places。
× I often talk about the travel place with my friends, we talk about we chat with the living room, the living and. Shizam.
✓ I often talk about travel places with my friends.
原句结构混乱,存在重复和无意义词汇,应简化为一句完整且通顺的话。
× I prefer to chat with a group of people because different people have different opinions. We can we can trans transport our opinions and in enhance our level.
✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because different people have different opinions. We can transport our opinions and enhance our level.
重复使用We can we can是错误的,且in enhance应改为enhance,去掉多余的介词。
× I prefer to communicate face to face. In this way I can offer observation to others and obtain reflection.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. In this way, I can offer observations to others and obtain reflections.
observation和reflection应使用复数形式,且offer后面不需要介词to。
× I have to argue with my friends because of a little misunderstanding about something, but we survived the programs instantly.
✓ I have to argue with my friends because of a small misunderstanding about something, but we resolved the problem instantly.
a little用于不可数名词,misunderstanding是可数名词,应使用a small。survived the programs语义错误,应改为resolved the problem。