Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I really like it. You know, when I chatting with my friends, I can share my some interesting things and difficulty in work to search the sport. When I chatting with them, they can give me some emotional support and make me happy.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I like to share with my friends with something interesting such as I watch a TV show that make to make me feel very interesting and happy. So I will share with them this TV show and I like to I like to invite them reading together.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I like to chatting just with just one people, because I think one if I chat with just one people, I can communicate deeply and I can share my really opinion to the to to him if.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate facing to face because I like to meet my friends in a coffee or in a park and we can communicate with some body language to experiment, experience my emotion and mean.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think it's vital because we have different ideal and different environment that we live in. So I think argue is a is a way to experience our our thinking and it's really a good.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“when I chatting”应为“when I chat”,同时表达不够简洁自然。建议注意动词时态和句子结构,避免重复和冗长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I can share interesting experiences and work difficulties. They often provide emotional support, which makes me feel happy.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题,如“make to make me feel”不正确,且句子重复。建议简化句子,使用正确的时态和表达方式。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about interesting things, like TV shows that I enjoy. For example, I recently watched a show that made me very happy, so I shared it with my friends and invited them to watch it together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不流畅且重复。建议练习正确的单复数形式和句子结构,表达观点时要简洁明了。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows me to communicate more deeply and share my true opinions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,如“facing to face”应为“face-to-face”,“experiment”用词不准确。建议使用正确短语和表达情感的词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because meeting friends in a café or park allows us to use body language to express our emotions and meanings more clearly.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“different ideal”应为“different ideas”,且表达不完整。建议注意单复数和句子完整性,表达观点时更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think arguing with friends is important because we have different ideas and backgrounds. Arguing helps us understand each other's thoughts better, which is beneficial.
× when I chatting with my friends, I can share my some interesting things and difficulty in work to search the sport.
✓ when I am chatting with my friends, I can share some interesting things and difficulties in work to search the sport.
动词进行时态需要使用动词be动词加动词的-ing形式,句中缺少am,且some应放在interesting things前面修饰名词。
× When I chatting with them, they can give me some emotional support and make me happy.
✓ When I am chatting with them, they can give me some emotional support and make me happy.
动词进行时态需要使用动词be动词加动词的-ing形式,句中缺少am。
× I can share my some interesting things and difficulty in work to search the sport.
✓ I can share some interesting things and difficulties in work to search the sport.
some应直接修饰名词,不能放在my后面;difficulty应使用复数difficulties,因为表示多个困难。
× I like to share with my friends with something interesting such as I watch a TV show that make to make me feel very interesting and happy.
✓ I like to share something interesting with my friends, such as a TV show that makes me feel very interested and happy.
share后直接跟宾语,不能用介词with;make后应使用第三人称单数makes;feel后应使用形容词interested而非interesting。
× such as I watch a TV show that make to make me feel very interesting and happy.
✓ such as a TV show that makes me feel very interested and happy.
主语是单数TV show,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes。
× I like to chatting just with just one people, because I think one if I chat with just one people, I can communicate deeply and I can share my really opinion to the to to him if.
✓ I like to chat just with one person, because I think if I chat with just one person, I can communicate deeply and share my real opinion with him.
like后应接动词原形chat而非动名词chatting;people是复数,单数应使用person;really opinion应改为real opinion;share后接介词with。
× I like to chatting just with just one people, because I think one if I chat with just one people, I can communicate deeply and I can share my really opinion to the to to him if.
✓ I like to chat just with one person, because I think if I chat with just one person, I can communicate deeply and share my real opinion with him.
people是复数,单数应使用person。
× I prefer to communicate facing to face because I like to meet my friends in a coffee or in a park and we can communicate with some body language to experiment, experience my emotion and mean.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I like to meet my friends in a coffee shop or in a park, and we can communicate with some body language to express and experience my emotions and meaning.
短语face to face中不加介词to;coffee应为coffee shop;experiment用错,应为express;emotion和mean应使用复数emotions和meaning。
× I like to share with my friends with something interesting such as I watch a TV show that make to make me feel very interesting and happy.
✓ I like to share something interesting with my friends, such as a TV show that makes me feel very interested and happy.
形容词interesting用错,应为感受者的形容词interested。
× I can share my really opinion to the to to him if.
✓ I can share my real opinion with him.
really是副词,修饰形容词real;share后应使用介词with而非to;句中多余的to。
× I think one if I chat with just one people, I can communicate deeply and I can share my really opinion to the to to him if.
✓ I think if I chat with just one person, I can communicate deeply and share my real opinion with him.
句中one和if重复且位置错误,应去掉one并调整if的位置。
× I can share my really opinion to the to to him if.
✓ I can share my real opinion with him.
my really opinion中really用错,应为real;share后应接介词with而非to;句中多余的to。
× I think it's vital because we have different ideal and different environment that we live in.
✓ I think it's vital because we have different ideas and different environments that we live in.
ideal是形容词,正确名词应为ideas;environment应使用复数environments。
× I think it's vital because we have different ideal and different environment that we live in.
✓ I think it's vital because we have different ideas and different environments that we live in.
ideas和environments应使用复数形式,表示多种不同的想法和环境。
× So I think argue is a is a way to experience our our thinking and it's really a good.
✓ So I think arguing is a way to express our thoughts and it's really good.
argue应使用动名词arguing作主语;experience our thinking表达不准确,应为express our thoughts;句尾a good缺少名词,改为good。