Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite long and somewhat repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Also, organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and have fun. We often talk about various topics, including funny stories and our daily experiences, which makes our conversations lively and interesting.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer vocabulary and provide more specific examples with linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: We usually chat about boys because they often affect our emotions. For example, my friend Sophie frequently talks about her boyfriend and shares her frustrations, which leads to interesting discussions among us.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely, and avoid trailing off at the end. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with my best friend because I feel comfortable and trust her. I avoid group chats since sometimes people gossip, which makes it hard for me to trust others.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains repetition. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words to explain why you prefer face-to-face communication.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see people's reactions and emotions directly. This makes conversations more genuine compared to chatting online, where it's harder to understand feelings.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite natural and includes an interesting opinion. To improve, try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid short, fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I argue with my friends quite often. I believe that frequent arguments show how close we are and how much we care about each other. Despite our disagreements, we always respect and love one another.

× Yes I really like that because it's really gives me enjoy and when my friends come into group and start chatting and gossiping about some idiot boys I really like that idea and we are talk about everything and anything and it is so good and I like it.

✓ Yes, I really like that because it really gives me enjoyment, and when my friends come into the group and start chatting and gossiping about some idiot boys, I really like that idea. We talk about everything and anything, and it is so good, and I like it.

The phrase 'gives me enjoy' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'enjoyment'. Also, 'we are talk' should be 'we talk' to maintain correct verb form. Additionally, missing articles like 'the' before 'group' and punctuation errors were corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Like my friend Sophie, she always talk about her boyfriend and complaining about him and really like that.

✓ Like my friend Sophie, she always talks about her boyfriend and complains about him and really likes that.

The verbs 'talk', 'complaining', and 'like' need to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Therefore, 'talk' should be 'talks', 'complaining' should be 'complains' to maintain parallel structure, and 'like' should be 'likes'.

× I prefer to chat with my best friend because I am comfort comfortable with her and I don't want to chat with any other people because a lot of people are saying what I say to another people and gossiping about me and I can't trust anyone.

✓ I prefer to chat with my best friend because I am comfortable with her, and I don't want to chat with other people because many people repeat what I say to others and gossip about me, and I can't trust anyone.

The word 'comfort' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also, 'another people' is incorrect; it should be 'others' or 'other people'. The sentence was also rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer communication face to face because when you're saying something, some drama, they will look at you and you can feel the heat of their face and how your news was big.

✓ I prefer communication face-to-face because when you're saying something dramatic, they will look at you, and you can feel the heat on their face and how big your news is.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. 'Some drama' is unclear and should be 'something dramatic'. Also, 'heat of their face' should be 'heat on their face' to use the correct preposition. 'How your news was big' is awkward and corrected to 'how big your news is' to maintain present tense and clarity.

× Like my friend Sophie, she always talk about her boyfriend and complaining about him and really like that.

✓ Like my friend Sophie, she always talks about her boyfriend, complains about him, and really likes that.

The verbs need to be in the simple present tense to agree with the habitual action indicated by 'always'. 'Talk' should be 'talks', 'complaining' should be 'complains', and 'like' should be 'likes'.

× It's so hard to trust anyone in this world because.

✓ It's so hard to trust anyone in this world.

The sentence ends with 'because' without completing the thought, which is a sentence fragment. Removing 'because' completes the sentence properly.