Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course, even though I'm an interview person, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, weekend and all. Do you know and, uh, have some time to speak some gossip and, uh, share some thoughts and feelings and opinions on our recent life? Umm, that's kind of, uh, ease and the cure of.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Recently and, uh, typically we, you, uh, we are used to chat about our feelings and, uh, our opinions, our perspective and our thoughts together, maybe towards one thing happened recently or maybe it's uh, uh, breaking news of the international.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to travel with only my friend, only one friend because through chatting, uh, face to face and uh, one to one, I think we can, uh, increase our depth of our, umm, conversation and uh, I, we can both gain something from that.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
In the past I prefer face to face chatting, but recently I do enjoy to chatting via social media cards. It is quite quite convenient for us to charting all the time and we can share our thoughts and our feelings online, so we don't need to spend much too much more time on social relationship.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, and I think argument is quite simple and, uh, normal in our daily life. Uh, only if we have some arguments, we can move on. We can move forward, not just uh, uh, stay here and just please each other. I don't think that work a lot.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在较多语法错误和表达不自然的问题,且有较多的填充词(如"uh"、"umm"),影响流畅度。建议简化句子结构,避免重复和冗余,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially on weekends. We often share our thoughts, feelings, and opinions about our recent experiences. It helps me relax and feel connected with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,存在重复和不连贯的问题。建议使用更清晰的句子结构,适当使用连接词,使表达更连贯自然。
Ví dụ: Usually, we chat about our feelings and opinions on recent events. Sometimes, we discuss breaking international news or things that happened recently, sharing our perspectives with each other.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达较为清晰,但存在重复和填充词,影响流畅度。建议减少重复,使用更准确的词汇,并注意句子结构的完整性。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a friend because face-to-face conversations allow us to have deeper and more meaningful discussions, which benefits both of us.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如"enjoy to chatting"和"social media cards"。建议使用正确的动词形式和词汇,表达更准确自然。
Ví dụ: I used to prefer face-to-face communication, but recently I enjoy chatting via social media because it's very convenient. We can share our thoughts and feelings anytime without spending too much time in person.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和重复填充词,影响表达清晰度。建议简化句子,使用更准确的表达,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think arguments are normal in daily life. They help us resolve issues and move forward instead of just agreeing to please each other, which is not very effective.
× I do enjoy to chatting via social media cards.
✓ I do enjoy chatting via social media cards.
动词 enjoy 后应接动名词形式(-ing),而不是不定式 to + 动词原形。这里应使用 'enjoy chatting'。
× It is quite quite convenient for us to charting all the time and we can share our thoughts and our feelings online, so we don't need to spend much too much more time on social relationship.
✓ It is quite quite convenient for us to chat all the time and we can share our thoughts and our feelings online, so we don't need to spend too much more time on social relationships.
动词不定式后不应接动名词,'to charting' 是错误的,应为 'to chat'。另外,'much too much more time' 中 'much' 重复,应去掉一个。'social relationship' 应为复数形式 'social relationships'。
× I prefer to travel with only my friend, only one friend because through chatting, uh, face to face and uh, one to one, I think we can, uh, increase our depth of our, umm, conversation and uh, I, we can both gain something from that.
✓ I prefer to chat with only my friend, only one friend because through chatting, uh, face to face and uh, one to one, I think we can, uh, increase the depth of our, umm, conversation and uh, we can both gain something from that.
'travel with only my friend' 语境不符,应为 'chat with only my friend'。'increase our depth of our conversation' 中 'our' 重复,应改为 'increase the depth of our conversation'。
× Do you know and, uh, have some time to speak some gossip and, uh, share some thoughts and feelings and opinions on our recent life?
✓ Do you know and, uh, have some time to speak some gossip and, uh, share some thoughts, feelings, and opinions about our recent life?
'share opinions on' 通常用 'about' 来表达对某事的看法,'opinions about' 更合适。
× Recently and, uh, typically we, you, uh, we are used to chat about our feelings and, uh, our opinions, our perspective and our thoughts together, maybe towards one thing happened recently or maybe it's uh, uh, breaking news of the international.
✓ Recently and, uh, typically we are used to chatting about our feelings, our opinions, our perspectives, and our thoughts together, maybe about something that happened recently or maybe it's, uh, breaking international news.
'we, you, uh, we' 语序混乱,应简化为 'we'。'used to chat' 后应接动名词 'chatting'。'our perspective' 应为复数 'our perspectives'。'towards one thing happened recently' 结构不正确,应改为 'about something that happened recently'。'breaking news of the international' 语序错误,应为 'breaking international news'。
× so we don't need to spend much too much more time on social relationship.
✓ so we don't need to spend too much more time on social relationships.
'spend time on' 后接复数名词 'social relationships' 更合适,且 'much too much' 重复,应去掉一个 'much'。