Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course, I'm fond of chatting with my friends, especially having some deep conversations. This is largely because I do think that, uh, chatting with others is a good opportunity for us to get some inspiring ideas to think creatively.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
It depends on what type of the friends is some, uh, some friends like my senior, the topics may just be the working details, uh, because my job is about robotic engineering. So the chatting contents with my senior may just be some advanced in Dropbox or uh, the new requirement.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
As for me, I'd opt for the latter. This is largely because I'm an I am Fiji, which means that I'm a little introvert. So I'm I'm more inclined to stay with only one person because I do like the deep conversation talking with others because it has higher quality.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I'd opt for the latter. This is largely because I'm not such kind of person who like to chat with other in person because in this situation really make me embarrassed and I may make numerous mistakes during the period of chatting with others face to face.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course, it's common for everyone to have some divergent notions against others, so it always causes some argument of. Let me share the personal experiences. When we talk about some working details, my friends think that we could use some new tools to fix it, but I think that we should use the.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容相关,但存在口语填充词“uh”,影响流畅性。建议减少语气词,回答更简洁,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we have deep conversations. I find that talking with others often inspires me to think more creatively.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答结构不够清晰,语法和表达有误,且有多处口语填充词。建议理清句子结构,使用连词使表达更连贯,具体说明聊天内容。
Ví dụ: It depends on the friend. For example, with my senior colleagues, I usually discuss work-related topics such as advancements in robotics or new project requirements.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不清楚的词汇("I am Fiji"),影响理解。建议使用准确词汇,避免重复,句子更简洁,逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I am a bit introverted. I find one-on-one conversations more meaningful and of higher quality.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达有些冗长且语法错误较多。建议简化句子,使用正确语法,表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer communicating via social media because I feel embarrassed and nervous when talking face-to-face, which sometimes makes me make mistakes.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱,缺少结尾和具体细节。建议完整回答问题,提供具体例子,使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially about work. For instance, they suggest using new tools to solve a problem, but I believe we should stick to the traditional methods.
× It depends on what type of the friends is some, uh, some friends like my senior, the topics may just be the working details, uh, because my job is about robotic engineering.
✓ It depends on what type of friends they are. Some friends, like my senior, the topics may just be the working details, because my job is about robotic engineering.
这里的主语是复数friends,谓语动词应使用复数形式are,而不是is。主谓不一致导致语法错误。建议注意主语的单复数形式,确保谓语动词与主语一致。
× So the chatting contents with my senior may just be some advanced in Dropbox or uh, the new requirement.
✓ So the chatting contents with my senior may just be some advances in Dropbox or the new requirements.
这里的介词使用不当,应该用复数形式advances和requirements来表达多个进展和需求。建议注意名词的复数形式及其搭配的介词使用。
× As for me, I'd opt for the latter. This is largely because I'm an I am Fiji, which means that I'm a little introvert.
✓ As for me, I'd opt for the latter. This is largely because I'm an introvert, which means that I'm a little introverted.
原句中'I am Fiji'不合适,应该是'introvert'表示内向的人,且形容词应为'introverted'。建议正确使用代词和形容词表达性格特征。
× So I'm I'm more inclined to stay with only one person because I do like the deep conversation talking with others because it has higher quality.
✓ So I'm more inclined to stay with only one person because I do like deep conversations with others as they have higher quality.
原句中'the deep conversation talking with others'结构不正确,应该用复数形式'deep conversations'并且调整句子结构。建议注意代词和名词的搭配及句子结构的合理性。
× To be honest, I'd opt for the latter. This is largely because I'm not such kind of person who like to chat with other in person because in this situation really make me embarrassed and I may make numerous mistakes during the period of chatting with others face to face.
✓ To be honest, I'd opt for the latter. This is largely because I'm not the kind of person who likes to chat with others in person because in this situation I really feel embarrassed and I may make numerous mistakes during chatting with others face to face.
原句中'like to chat with other in person'应为'likes to chat with others in person',且缺少主语'I'导致句子不完整。建议注意介词和代词的正确使用及句子完整性。
× Of course, it's common for everyone to have some divergent notions against others, so it always causes some argument of.
✓ Of course, it's common for everyone to have some divergent notions against others, so it always causes some arguments.
原句末尾'argument of'结构不完整,应为'arguments'。建议注意句子结构完整,避免使用不完整的短语。