Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes, definitely. I love to chat with my friend, especially when I don't have any good moods. So I want to express my feelings to my friend and uh, to uh, and also, uh, he's sharing my experience with about the days.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat with my friend when I have something that is coming up project at which I receive from my professors to be talking about how to meet reschedule for the meeting and as well as not only that the the heart but we also chatting of the daily routine as well.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Thanks for my personality before I go to traffic. Only one friend. Because, uh, I feel like I'm not, uh, comfortable with, uh, chatting with you because I don't want people, you know, be unjudgeable for my, umm, my life and, uh, my personality.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Umm, for me, I really love to interact with face to face because, uh, this can help, you know, it's have to express more clearly and I find out that social media is can not be ever be good reasons to be, uh, interacted to someone.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, uh, definitely when I was so young, I used to have to get my friend those two misunderstanding, umm, but uh, however, umm, we now become uh, a good friend and we tries to uh, resolution and correct in what the dot WF has.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use plural form 'friends' instead of 'friend' when talking generally. Make your sentences clearer and more concise by structuring your ideas logically.
Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I'm feeling down. I like to express my feelings to them, and they often share their own experiences from their day.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and coherence by organizing your answer with linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use specific vocabulary related to your topics and keep sentences concise.
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about upcoming projects assigned by my professors, such as rescheduling meetings. Besides that, we also talk about our daily routines.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and unclear expressions. Use correct vocabulary and grammar to express your ideas clearly. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable and less judged.'
Ví dụ: Due to my personality, I prefer chatting with only one friend. I feel more comfortable and less judged when I talk one-on-one rather than in a group.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain why face-to-face communication is clearer than social media.
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express myself more clearly. In contrast, social media often lacks the personal touch needed for effective interaction.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to explain your ideas clearly. Structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to argue with my friends when I was younger due to misunderstandings. However, we have since resolved our issues and become good friends.
× I love to chat with my friend, especially when I don't have any good moods.
✓ I love to chat with my friends, especially when I don't have a good mood.
The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the general context of chatting with multiple people. Also, 'moods' should be singular 'mood' because 'good mood' is an uncountable state, not multiple moods.
× he's sharing my experience with about the days.
✓ he's sharing his experiences about the days.
The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used before 'about'. Also, 'my experience' should be 'his experiences' to correctly reflect that he is sharing his own experiences.
× I usually chat with my friend when I have something that is coming up project at which I receive from my professors to be talking about how to meet reschedule for the meeting and as well as not only that the the heart but we also chatting of the daily routine as well.
✓ I usually chat with my friends when I have an upcoming project that I receive from my professors, to talk about how to reschedule the meeting. Besides that, we also chat about our daily routines.
'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to indicate multiple people. 'Project' needs an article 'an' and 'upcoming' is the correct adjective. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Chatting of' is incorrect; it should be 'chat about'. 'Daily routine' should be plural 'daily routines' to refer to multiple people's routines.
× Thanks for my personality before I go to traffic. Only one friend.
✓ Because of my personality, I prefer to talk to only one friend before going out.
The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect phrases like 'go to traffic'. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses appropriate pronouns and expressions.
× I feel like I'm not, uh, comfortable with, uh, chatting with you because I don't want people, you know, be unjudgeable for my, umm, my life and, uh, my personality.
✓ I feel like I'm not comfortable chatting with others because I don't want people to judge my life and personality.
'Unjudgeable' is not a correct word; the correct expression is 'to judge'. Also, 'chatting with you' is changed to 'chatting with others' to fit the context. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.
× I really love to interact with face to face because, uh, this can help, you know, it's have to express more clearly
✓ I really love to interact face-to-face because it helps me express myself more clearly.
The phrase 'interact with face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'interact face-to-face'. Also, 'it's have to express' is grammatically incorrect and is corrected to 'it helps me express'.
× I find out that social media is can not be ever be good reasons to be, uh, interacted to someone.
✓ I find that social media can never be a good way to interact with someone.
The phrase 'is can not be ever be good reasons' is incorrect and redundant. 'Interacted to someone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'interact with someone'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Yes, uh, definitely when I was so young, I used to have to get my friend those two misunderstanding, umm, but uh, however, umm, we now become uh, a good friend and we tries to uh, resolution and correct in what the dot WF has.
✓ Yes, definitely. When I was young, I used to have misunderstandings with my friend, but now we have become good friends and we try to resolve and correct those issues.
The original sentence has multiple tense and grammar errors. 'Used to have to get my friend those two misunderstanding' is incorrect; it should be 'used to have misunderstandings with my friend'. 'We now become' should be 'we have become'. 'We tries' should be 'we try'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.