Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and relieve stress from my daily routine. We often message each other during free time, which makes those moments very enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid filler words and try to use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be specific about the topics you discuss with friends.

Ví dụ: Usually, when I am with a group of friends, we talk about various topics that come to our mind spontaneously. Sometimes, we also discuss the time we have spent together and share our experiences.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting reasons, using appropriate linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to exchange ideas and learn from different perspectives. This helps me improve my knowledge and stay updated about what is happening in society.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but incomplete and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to explain your reasons more effectively.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe people's expressions and body language. This helps me understand them better and improves my communication skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is affected by filler words and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when I disagree with their opinions. However, these discussions are helpful because they allow us to share new ideas and see different perspectives.

× I like to spend time with my friend doing chit chat, doing Googling and uh, in free time, uh, doing messaging it.

✓ I like to spend time with my friends doing chit chat, Googling and, in my free time, messaging.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the context implies spending time with more than one friend. Also, 'doing Googling' and 'doing messaging it' are incorrect; 'Googling' and 'messaging' are gerunds used without 'doing'. Additionally, 'in free time' should be 'in my free time' for correctness.

× It will make me relax and stress free from my daily routine work.

✓ It helps me relax and be stress-free from my daily routine work.

The phrase 'make me relax' is better expressed as 'helps me relax'. Also, 'stress free' should be hyphenated as 'stress-free'. The preposition 'from' is acceptable here but the sentence structure is improved by adding 'be' before 'stress-free'.

× Uh, this is uh, best movement of my life when I am with my friends.

✓ This is the best moment of my life when I am with my friends.

The word 'movement' is incorrect; the correct word is 'moment'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'best moment'.

× When you see the together a group of friends, we don't have any topic to discuss with us randomly talk and start, uh, any traffic come to our mind.

✓ When you see a group of friends together, we don't have any specific topic to discuss; we randomly talk and start any topic that comes to our mind.

The sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrasing. 'The together a group' is incorrect; it should be 'a group of friends together'. 'Traffic' is incorrect; the intended word is 'topic'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× we don't have any topic to discuss with us randomly talk and start, uh, any traffic come to our mind.

✓ we don't have any topic to discuss; we randomly talk and start any topic that comes to our mind.

The phrase 'discuss with us' is incorrect; it should be 'discuss'. Also, 'traffic' is a wrong word here; 'topic' is correct. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I love him and enjoy discussion with more and more people.

✓ I love it and enjoy discussions with more and more people.

'I love him' is incorrect in this context; 'it' refers to chatting or discussion. 'Discussion' should be plural 'discussions' because it refers to multiple instances.

× I believe by that we communicate and express ideas which help to improve our knowledge and the hour of the society.

✓ I believe that by doing so, we communicate and express ideas which help to improve our knowledge and the welfare of society.

'By that' is unclear; 'by doing so' is better. 'The hour of the society' is incorrect; likely intended 'the welfare of society'. Pronouns and phrases are corrected for clarity.

× What is going on?

✓ What is going on?

This sentence is grammatically correct but contextually unclear; no correction needed.

× Uh, instead of talking to 1 friend, it is better to discuss.

✓ Instead of talking to one friend, it is better to discuss with a group.

'1 friend' should be written as 'one friend'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'with a group' clarifies the meaning.

× I enjoy communicating face to face and physically than through social media or telephone.

✓ I enjoy communicating face to face and physically more than through social media or telephone.

The sentence lacks the comparative word 'more' before 'than'. Adding 'more' corrects the comparison.

× I believe by sending face to face we able to learn the way people express, communicate.

✓ I believe that by communicating face to face, we are able to learn the way people express and communicate.

'By sending face to face' is incorrect; 'by communicating face to face' is correct. Also, 'we able' should be 'we are able'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× It will help to develop our knowledge and.

✓ It will help to develop our knowledge.

The sentence is incomplete; removing the trailing 'and' completes the sentence.

× Yes, we can discuss.

✓ Yes, we do discuss.

'Can' implies ability, but the intended meaning is habitual action, so 'do' is more appropriate.

× sometimes I argue with my friends when I'm not agree with the, uh, topic or their opinion.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends when I do not agree with the topic or their opinion.

'I'm not agree' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not agree'.

× Uh, this is helpful for uh, me as well as my friend because it's create a new idea and give a new perspective of the thought, what we're thinking.

✓ This is helpful for me as well as my friends because it creates new ideas and gives a new perspective on the thoughts we are thinking.

'It's create' should be 'it creates' to agree with the singular subject. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' for consistency. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject. 'Perspective of the thought' should be 'perspective on the thoughts'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and article use.