Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
I'm not a resourceful person and I'm an introvert which means that I love to spend time with myself in save my own energy. I like chatting with my families but not with my friends because I found family is more comfortable person to chat with.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually avoid talking about personal matters with my friends because I don't feel comfortable sharing my problem with them. For example, if I'm facing any difficulties, I prefer to handle them on my own since I don't think that they could really help me to solve those issues.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I would prefer a trip with only one friends because I'm not a really loud person. I'm not good at expressing myself when I chat with a large group of people I always worry about rather I was taking the mic.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I'm not a big fans of social media. I always think that is is corrupting our mind and in affecting all the real relationship in real life face to face is a more.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
I'm a really kind person, I always prefer not getting into a fight. I always have a mind of understanding and accept. I think everyone have their own perspective of thinking and I will not easily judge them unless it is really really.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,并注意单复数和冠词的使用。可以更清晰地表达自己喜欢和家人聊天的原因。
Ví dụ: I am an introvert and prefer spending time alone to save my energy. I enjoy chatting with my family because I feel more comfortable with them than with friends.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为具体,但句子较长且有些重复,建议使用连接词使表达更流畅,同时注意语法和词汇的准确性。
Ví dụ: I usually avoid discussing personal matters with my friends because I don't feel comfortable sharing my problems. For instance, when I face difficulties, I prefer to solve them by myself as I believe they may not be able to help.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子,注意单复数和词汇使用,使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am a quiet person. When I talk in a large group, I often worry about whether I am dominating the conversation.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,建议完整表达观点,注意主谓一致和句子结构,使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I am not a big fan of social media because I think it can negatively affect our minds and real-life relationships. Therefore, I prefer face-to-face communication.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不完整,建议使用完整句子,注意主谓一致和词汇准确性,清晰表达自己的观点。
Ví dụ: I am a kind person and prefer to avoid arguments. I try to understand and accept others' perspectives because everyone thinks differently, and I don't judge them easily unless it's very serious.
× I like chatting with my families but not with my friends because I found family is more comfortable person to chat with.
✓ I like chatting with my family but not with my friends because I find family is a more comfortable person to chat with.
“families”应为不可数名词“family”,表示家庭整体;“found”时态不对,应为一般现在时“find”,因为表达的是习惯性事实。
× I'm not a resourceful person and I'm an introvert which means that I love to spend time with myself in save my own energy.
✓ I'm not a resourceful person and I'm an introvert which means that I love to spend time by myself to save my own energy.
“in save”结构错误,应改为“to save”表示目的;“with myself”通常表达为“by myself”表示独自。
× I would prefer a trip with only one friends because I'm not a really loud person.
✓ I would prefer a trip with only one friend because I'm not a really loud person.
“friends”应为单数“friend”,因为前面有“only one”限定。
× I'm not good at expressing myself when I chat with a large group of people I always worry about rather I was taking the mic.
✓ I'm not good at expressing myself when I chat with a large group of people. I always worry about whether I am taking the mic.
原句缺少句号导致句子结构混乱;“rather”用错,应为“whether”表示是否;“was”时态不对,应为现在时“am”。
× I'm not a big fans of social media.
✓ I'm not a big fan of social media.
“fans”应为单数“fan”,因为前面有不定冠词“a”。
× I always think that is is corrupting our mind and in affecting all the real relationship in real life face to face is a more.
✓ I always think that it is corrupting our minds and affecting all the real relationships in real life. Face-to-face communication is better.
句子结构混乱,缺少主语“it”;“mind”应为复数“minds”;“in affecting”应为“and affecting”;“relationship”应为复数“relationships”;最后一句不完整,补充完整表达。
× I think everyone have their own perspective of thinking and I will not easily judge them unless it is really really.
✓ I think everyone has their own perspective of thinking and I will not easily judge them unless it is really serious.
“everyone”是单数,谓语动词应为“has”;“really really”不完整,补充为“really serious”使句子完整。