Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, especially when I'm trying to organize some kind of parties and or and planning to go somewhere like to have a dinner or any anywhere.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I used to chat with my close friends about study about lessons last month, but now I prefer usually chatting about sports like football or going to gym.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Eat matters on a topic of conversation, I think if it is a organizing, some kind of parties, uh, I would prefer, uh, group of friends, but it, it is some kind of secret, uh, topics, uh, my secret topics, I would prefer only my best friends and cool friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
If I have to choose only one option, I would choose, uh, face to face because it's more natural, it's more easy to understand each other. Uh, it's more, umm, some kind of umm, feelingful, uh, and it is best I can say.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Sometimes yes, especially at school during math lessons, uh, for example, when we have different answers to a problem, we both say mine is right and there will there would happen some kind of disagreement and it is good, I think.
Do you like chatting with friends?
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Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially when we are planning parties or going out for dinner together.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
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Ví dụ: I used to talk with my close friends about our studies last month, but now I usually chat about sports, such as football or going to the gym.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
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Ví dụ: It depends on the topic. If we are organizing a party, I prefer chatting with a group of friends. However, for private or secret topics, I prefer talking only with my best friends.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
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Ví dụ: If I had to choose, I would prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and makes it easier to understand each other.
Do you argue with friends?
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Ví dụ: Sometimes I argue with friends, especially during math lessons at school. For example, when we have different answers to a problem, we disagree, but I think it's a good thing.
× Yes, of course, especially when I'm trying to organize some kind of parties and or and planning to go somewhere like to have a dinner or any anywhere.
✓ Yes, of course, especially when I'm trying to organize some kind of parties or planning to go somewhere like to have dinner or anywhere.
The phrase 'and or and' is an incorrect conjunction use. It should be simplified to 'or' to correctly connect the ideas. Also, 'a dinner' is incorrect; 'dinner' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article. 'Any anywhere' is redundant; 'anywhere' alone is sufficient.
× I used to chat with my close friends about study about lessons last month, but now I prefer usually chatting about sports like football or going to gym.
✓ I used to chat with my close friends about studying lessons last month, but now I usually prefer chatting about sports like football or going to the gym.
The phrase 'about study about lessons' is incorrect; 'studying lessons' or 'studies' is more appropriate. 'Prefer usually chatting' is awkward; 'usually prefer chatting' is the correct adverb placement. Also, 'going to gym' needs the definite article 'the' before 'gym'.
× Eat matters on a topic of conversation, I think if it is a organizing, some kind of parties, uh, I would prefer, uh, group of friends, but it, it is some kind of secret, uh, topics, uh, my secret topics, I would prefer only my best friends and cool friends.
✓ It depends on the topic of conversation, I think. If it is organizing some kind of parties, I would prefer a group of friends, but if it is some kind of secret topics, my secret topics, I would prefer only my best friends and close friends.
The original sentence has multiple issues including incorrect conjunctions and sentence structure. 'Eat matters' should be 'It depends'. 'a organizing' should be 'organizing'. 'group of friends' needs an article 'a'. 'cool friends' is likely a misuse; 'close friends' is more appropriate. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper conjunction use.
× If I have to choose only one option, I would choose, uh, face to face because it's more natural, it's more easy to understand each other. Uh, it's more, umm, some kind of umm, feelingful, uh, and it is best I can say.
✓ If I have to choose only one option, I would choose face-to-face because it's more natural and it's easier to understand each other. It's more, um, emotional, and it is the best, I can say.
'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. 'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'. 'Feelingful' is not a standard English word; 'emotional' or 'expressive' is more appropriate. Also, 'and it is best I can say' is awkward; 'and it is the best, I can say' is clearer.
× Sometimes yes, especially at school during math lessons, uh, for example, when we have different answers to a problem, we both say mine is right and there will there would happen some kind of disagreement and it is good, I think.
✓ Sometimes, yes, especially at school during math lessons. For example, when we have different answers to a problem, we both say mine is right and there will be some kind of disagreement, and I think it is good.
The phrase 'there will there would happen' is incorrect modal verb usage and redundancy. It should be 'there will be'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by splitting into clearer sentences. Modal verbs should be used correctly to express certainty or possibility.