Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Friends. Yes, I like chat with friends. Usually I chat with my friends on evening and in evening we can talk about anything.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat about my life and sometimes I talk about my work because we are seeing Internet industry so we can have many topics to discuss such as Python, Swift.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with one friend friend because I think 1 to 1 and especially face to face will bring me a high intention of the chat.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer face to face.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes sometimes, but we will find after argue we are good friends.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“like chat”应为“like chatting”,并且表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子并注意时态和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. Usually, we talk in the evening about various topics.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,如“we are seeing Internet industry”不清楚。建议使用更清晰的表达,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually chat about my personal life and sometimes about my work in the internet industry, discussing topics like Python and Swift programming languages.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇“friend friend”,表达不够自然。建议用完整句子表达偏好,并解释原因,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because one-to-one conversations, especially face-to-face, allow for more focused and meaningful communication.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和支持理由。建议扩展回答,说明原因并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for better understanding through body language and immediate feedback.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“after argue”应为“after arguing”,表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子并说明观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes we argue, but after resolving our disagreements, our friendship becomes stronger.
× I like chat with friends.
✓ I like chatting with friends.
动词like后面应接动名词形式,表示喜欢做某事。这里chat应改为chatting。
× Usually I chat with my friends on evening and in evening we can talk about anything.
✓ Usually I chat with my friends in the evening and in the evening we can talk about anything.
表示一天中的时间段应使用介词in,且the evening是固定搭配,表示特定时间段。
× I usually chat about my life and sometimes I talk about my work because we are seeing Internet industry so we can have many topics to discuss such as Python, Swift.
✓ I usually chat about my life and sometimes I talk about my work because we are in the Internet industry so we can have many topics to discuss such as Python, Swift.
表示处于某行业应使用介词in,而不是seeing。
× I prefer to chat with one friend friend because I think 1 to 1 and especially face to face will bring me a high intention of the chat.
✓ I prefer to chat with one friend because I think one-to-one and especially face-to-face will bring me a high level of attention during the chat.
重复了friend,应去掉多余的friend;数字1应写为one;短语one-to-one和face-to-face需要连字符;high intention用法不当,应改为high level of attention。
× I prefer face to face.
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication.
face-to-face作为形容词或副词时需要连字符,且此处应补充名词communication使句子完整。
× Yes sometimes, but we will find after argue we are good friends.
✓ Yes, sometimes, but we find that after arguing we are still good friends.
argue作为动名词时应加-ing形式;will find时态不合适,改为一般现在时find;句子结构需调整以表达清晰。