Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think so. I'd like to have some meaningful conversations with my friends, not only focusing on the hobbies and the favorite movies, but also focusing on the social issues and the local news happened. And moreover, whenever I feel tired and stressed, I'd like to chat with my friends, which can help me reduce my anxiety and give me a sense of power and just calm.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
In most of cases they would like to chat about some daily issues like cosmetics, handsome actors, trips and maybe British TV shows. And on the other hand, we also focusing on some meaningful topics like how to make a friend in a completely new environment and how to adapt to a new working circumstances and how to express love and care.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I'd like to chat with only one friend, mainly due to my individual personality. Chatting with your family one can give me a sense of support and calm. On the other hand, I think I need to cultivate a Wellness and ability to chat with a group of people, to expand our social circle, to meet more like minded person, to get some useful knowledge and information.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Personally, I prefer face to face communication because effective eye contact, useful body language and facial expressions can be helped a lot in convening some emotions and expressing your own ideas. And even though we need to admit that communicating online via social medias can could be more convenient and faster, but I'm not used to it.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do sometimes argue with my friend even though I can always remember the details of the arguments. But I believe that disagreements with our close friend can help us have a better understanding of each other's opinions and which can be very helpful in establishing a strong and high quality friendship.
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Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且部分表达不够简洁，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often discuss not only hobbies and favorite movies but also social issues and local news. Moreover, talking with them helps me relieve stress and feel more relaxed.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题，建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Usually, we talk about daily topics such as cosmetics, popular actors, trips, and British TV shows. Besides that, we also discuss meaningful subjects like making friends in new environments, adapting to new work situations, and expressing love and care.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“your family one”和“cultivate a Wellness”，建议加强语法基础，使用恰当词汇，并简化表达。
Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer chatting with one friend because of my personality. It makes me feel supported and calm. However, I also want to improve my skills to talk in groups to expand my social circle and learn new things.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“can could be”，建议注意语法准确性，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because eye contact, body language, and facial expressions help convey emotions and ideas. Although online communication is more convenient, I am not used to it.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整且有逻辑，但句子较长且部分表达重复，建议简化句子，避免冗余，使表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, and I remember the details well. However, I believe that disagreements help us understand each other better and build stronger friendships.
Ngữ pháp
× ...the local news happened.
✓ ...the local news that happened.
这里缺少关系代词'that'，导致句子结构不完整。应加上'that'引导定语从句，修饰'local news'。
× ...we also focusing on some meaningful topics...
✓ ...we also focus on some meaningful topics...
动词时态错误，主语是复数，谓语应使用一般现在时'focus'，而不是现在分词'Focusing'。
× ...a new working circumstances...
✓ ...new working circumstances...
'circumstances'是复数，前面不应加不定冠词'a'。
× ...to meet more like minded person...
✓ ...to meet more like-minded people...
'person'为单数，前面有'more'表示比较级，需用复数形式'people'。
× ...facial expressions can be helped a lot in convening some emotions...
✓ ...facial expressions can help a lot in conveying some emotions...
'helped'为过去分词，句意应为'facial expressions can help'，且单词拼写错误，应为'conveying'而非'convening'。
× ...communicating online via social medias can could be more convenient and faster...
✓ ...communicating online via social media can be more convenient and faster...
情态动词使用错误，'can'和'could'不能连用，应选用其中一个。且'social media'为不可数名词，无复数形式。
× ...sometimes argue with my friend...
✓ ...sometimes argue with my friends...
根据上下文，指的是与朋友们争论，复数形式更合适。
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