Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course, I enjoyed chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Reina. We usually share our daily life which each other and I think it's the best way to strange my relationship.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
As my last motion, I usually chat about my daily life with my friends and we always support each other. I think it's a good way to close my friendship.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friends because I think when I face one friend we can do a deeper conversation and focus each other.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because this weekend, uh, helps me feels people's moods and umm, it's very honest.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Actually I never argue with my friend because I'm an easy going person and I think I'll argue with my friends well heart our relationships.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“share our daily life which each other”和“strange my relationship”,应改为“share our daily lives with each other”和“strengthen my relationship”。建议注意语法准确性和词汇搭配。
Ví dụ: Of course, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Reina. We usually share details about our daily lives with each other, and I think it's the best way to strengthen our relationship.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然,存在语法错误,如“As my last motion”和“close my friendship”,应改为“As I mentioned earlier”和“strengthen my friendship”。建议使用更自然的表达和准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: As I mentioned earlier, I usually chat about my daily life with my friends, and we always support each other. I think it's a good way to strengthen our friendship.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“only one friends”和“focus each other”,应改为“only one friend”和“focus on each other”。建议注意单复数和介词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think when I talk to one person, we can have a deeper conversation and focus on each other.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,存在语法和表达错误,如“this weekend, uh, helps me feels people's moods”,应改为“because it helps me feel people's moods”。建议提高表达的连贯性和准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps me feel people's moods more clearly, and I think it's a more honest way to communicate.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达错误较多,如“I'll argue with my friends well heart our relationships”,应改为“arguing would hurt our relationships”。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配。
Ví dụ: Actually, I never argue with my friends because I'm an easy-going person, and I think arguing would hurt our relationships.
× Of course, I enjoyed chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Reina.
✓ Of course, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Reina.
这里的时态应该与问题保持一致,问题是一般现在时,回答也应使用一般现在时。'friends'是复数,使用正确。
× We usually share our daily life which each other and I think it's the best way to strange my relationship.
✓ We usually share our daily life with each other and I think it's the best way to strengthen my relationship.
短语应为'share ... with each other',原句中缺少介词'with'。'strange'用错,应为'strengthen',表示加强关系。
× As my last motion, I usually chat about my daily life with my friends and we always support each other.
✓ As I mentioned before, I usually chat about my daily life with my friends and we always support each other.
'As my last motion'表达不正确,应为'As I mentioned before'表示“正如我之前提到的”。
× I think it's a good way to close my friendship.
✓ I think it's a good way to close my friendship.
此句中'close my friendship'表达不准确,应为'deepen my friendship'或'strengthen my friendship',但因不在问题类型列表中,故不修改。
× I prefer to chat with only one friends because I think when I face one friend we can do a deeper conversation and focus each other.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think when I face one friend we can have a deeper conversation and focus on each other.
'one friends'中'friends'应为单数'friend',因为前面有数量词'one'。
× I prefer to chat with only one friends because I think when I face one friend we can do a deeper conversation and focus each other.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think when I face one friend we can have a deeper conversation and focus on each other.
'focus each other'缺少介词'on',正确表达为'focus on each other'。
× I prefer to communicate face to face because this weekend, uh, helps me feels people's moods and umm, it's very honest.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it helps me feel people's moods and, umm, it's very honest.
'this weekend'用错,语境应为'it'指代面对面交流。'helps me feels'中'feels'应为原形'feel',因为助动词后动词用原形。
× Actually I never argue with my friend because I'm an easy going person and I think I'll argue with my friends well heart our relationships.
✓ Actually, I never argue with my friends because I'm an easy-going person and I think arguing with my friends will hurt our relationships.
'my friend'应为复数'my friends',与上下文一致。'I'll argue'时态和语义不符,应改为'arguing'。'well heart'应为'hurt',拼写错误。