Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ tự nhiên nhưng có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và lặp lại như "umm", "uh", và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially after a long and stressful day. Talking and sharing fun stories with them helps me relax and feel happy.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "I I" và chú ý ngữ pháp như "the their advices". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about recent events, such as my school scores. Also, I often ask for their advice when I face problems because they are very supportive and helpful.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều từ thừa và lỗi ngữ pháp như "when I'm have". Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để nối ý, tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. When I have funny stories, I prefer chatting with a big group to share the laughter. However, for deeper conversations, I prefer talking with just one close friend.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "who who" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I'm shy the face to face". Hãy dùng câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: It depends on who I'm communicating with. For people I'm not close to, I prefer social media because I'm shy in face-to-face conversations. But with close friends, I like to meet and talk in person.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều từ thừa như "uh", "umm". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh để thể hiện ý rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually get along well with my friends because we share stories and respect each other. However, sometimes we have different opinions on controversial topics, but we always respect each other's views.

× Absolutely yes, I love chatting with friends, especially with my best friend, you know, after umm, a long day with stress and overwork and you meet your friends and umm, you are uh, talking about some sharing the fun stories and I really.

✓ Absolutely yes, I love chatting with friends, especially with my best friend. You know, after a long day of stress and overwork, you meet your friends and talk about sharing fun stories, and I really enjoy it.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with unclear structure and missing connectors. Breaking it into shorter sentences and correcting verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I I usually chat with my friends about almost everything that happens recently.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about almost everything that has happened recently.

The phrase 'happens recently' is incorrect because 'recently' refers to past events; thus, the present perfect tense 'has happened' is appropriate here.

× For example, I I talk about my school scores or I need the their advices when I face problems and they're very supportive and helpful.

✓ For example, I talk about my school scores or I need their advice when I face problems, and they're very supportive and helpful.

The phrase 'the their advices' is incorrect; 'their advice' is the correct form since 'advice' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form or definite article here.

× I think it depends like uh, when I'm have a group of friends or with umm a funny stories, I need a group, a big group to laugh about it.

✓ I think it depends. Like, when I have a group of friends or a funny story, I need a big group to laugh about it.

The original sentence has incorrect verb form 'I'm have' and awkward phrasing. Correcting the verb to 'I have' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× But when I need uh, a deeper talk that I want to talk with the only one best friend.

✓ But when I need a deeper talk, I want to talk with only one best friend.

The phrase 'the only one best friend' is incorrect; 'only one best friend' is the correct form without the definite article 'the'.

× I think it depends on who who I am communicating with.

✓ I think it depends on who I am communicating with.

The repetition 'who who' is a mistake; removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× I for example with people that I'm not close to, I want to communicate through social media because I'm shy the face to face.

✓ For example, with people that I'm not close to, I want to communicate through social media because I'm shy in face-to-face communication.

The phrase 'I'm shy the face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm shy in face-to-face communication' to use the correct preposition and noun form.

× But with my close friends I'd like to stay connected in person.

✓ But with my close friends, I'd like to stay connected in person.

Adding a comma after 'friends' improves sentence clarity and structure.

× I really agree with my friends because, uh, most of the time we just share our stories and respect our company, but umm, uh, sometimes we also have some, uh, controversial topics that we have different, uh, opinions, but we still respect.

✓ I really agree with my friends because, most of the time, we just share our stories and respect each other's company. But sometimes, we also have some controversial topics where we have different opinions, but we still respect each other.

The phrase 'respect our company' is incorrect; it should be 'respect each other's company' to correctly express mutual respect. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.