Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because sometimes there's something bad happen. Friends can always give me a hug or give me some useful advices. They know more about my personality.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We share a lot in common, umm, we have a similar interest, especially in movies and music, so we always talk about them, uh, in our chatting topic and we also like to go to theater together.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because it can help me concentrate on what he or she talking about and, uh, we can know more about each other. That's.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer communicate face to face because I can see the emotion on uh. My friend's face says that I can know what they react, truly react because sometimes we just send e-mail.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, uh, in my experience sometimes there are some misunderstanding between us, but I think argue is not a bad thing. We can know more about ourselves.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“something bad happen”应为“something bad happens”,以及“advices”应为“advice”。建议注意动词时态和不可数名词的使用,同时回答可以更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they support me when I'm feeling down and always offer helpful advice. They understand my personality well.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语气词“umm”“uh”较多,影响流畅度。建议减少填充词,使用连词使句子更连贯,并且注意单复数形式,如“interest”应为“interests”。
Ví dụ: We share many interests, especially movies and music, so we often talk about these topics and enjoy going to the theater together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“he or she talking”应为“he or she is talking”,句尾不完整。建议注意完整表达,避免语法错误,并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it helps me focus on the conversation, and we can get to know each other better.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如缺少动词形式“to communicate”,句子结构不完整且表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础,使用完整句子,并清晰表达观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see my friend's emotions and understand their true reactions, which is difficult through emails.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“argue”应为“arguing”,以及“misunderstanding”应为复数“misunderstandings”。建议注意名词复数和动名词的正确使用,同时可以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes we have misunderstandings, but I believe arguing is not bad because it helps us understand ourselves better.
× Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because sometimes there's something bad happen.
✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because sometimes something bad happens.
这里的动词时态错误,'happen' 应该用第三人称单数形式 'happens',因为主语是 'something',是单数。
× Friends can always give me a hug or give me some useful advices.
✓ Friends can always give me a hug or give me some useful advice.
'Advice' 是不可数名词,不能用复数形式 'advices',应直接使用 'advice'。
× We share a lot in common, umm, we have a similar interest, especially in movies and music, so we always talk about them, uh, in our chatting topic and we also like to go to theater together.
✓ We share a lot in common, umm, we have similar interests, especially in movies and music, so we always talk about them, uh, in our chatting topics and we also like to go to the theater together.
'Interest' 应该用复数形式 'interests',因为指多个兴趣;'chatting topic' 应为复数 'chatting topics';'theater' 前应加定冠词 'the'。
× I prefer to chat with only one friend because it can help me concentrate on what he or she talking about and, uh, we can know more about each other. That's.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it can help me concentrate on what he or she is talking about and, uh, we can know more about each other. That's all.
'talking' 前缺少助动词 'is',构成现在进行时;句尾 'That's' 不完整,应补充 'all'。
× I prefer communicate face to face because I can see the emotion on uh. My friend's face says that I can know what they react, truly react because sometimes we just send e-mail.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see the emotion on, uh, my friend's face, which means I can know how they truly react because sometimes we just send e-mails.
'prefer communicate' 应为 'prefer to communicate';'on uh. My friend's face says that' 语序和标点错误,改为 'on, uh, my friend's face, which means' 更通顺;'what they react' 应为 'how they react';'e-mail' 复数形式应为 'e-mails'。
× Yes, uh, in my experience sometimes there are some misunderstanding between us, but I think argue is not a bad thing.
✓ Yes, uh, in my experience sometimes there are some misunderstandings between us, but I think arguing is not a bad thing.
'misunderstanding' 应用复数 'misunderstandings';'argue' 应用动名词形式 'arguing'。