Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like chatting with my friends because when I stay home alone I feel very lonely. So I need to chat with my friends to feel, to follow my heart.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I already chat with my friends about daily life and works because uh we work day and day and can't connect with other people so I usually chat with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Actually, both of them might do. We have a WeChat group with my college classmate classmates and we usually chat with only one friend, usually with my high school.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Usually I prefer to communicate fast for fares because I think face to face communication can improve my uh communication skills. It's better than UH connect on the on the Internet.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
It's seldom like this. I think we need a tolerant attitude with friends in daily life or communication, uh, which is, uh, most important is happy with.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达了喜欢与朋友聊天的原因,但语言不够自然,且有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构,避免重复和不连贯的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel less lonely when I'm at home alone.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且表达不流畅,语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇,避免重复,并且补充具体细节使内容更丰富。
Ví dụ: I usually talk with my friends about our daily lives and work since we are busy and don't have much chance to meet others.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,句子结构混乱,信息表达不完整。建议明确表达偏好,并用连词连接句子,使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: I like both chatting in a group and one-on-one. For example, I often chat with my college classmates in a WeChat group, but I also talk individually with my high school friends.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语音填充词和表达不清,且逻辑不够连贯。建议去除多余词汇,明确表达观点,并用连接词增强逻辑性。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me improve my communication skills, which is better than chatting online.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有语音填充词,句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免重复和不连贯。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe tolerance is important for maintaining happy relationships.
× Yeah, I like chatting with my friends because when I stay home alone I feel very lonely. So I need to chat with my friends to feel, to follow my heart.
✓ Yeah, I like chatting with my friends because when I stay home alone I feel very lonely. So I need to chat with my friends to feel, to follow my heart.
此句中动词形式使用正确,无需修改。
× I already chat with my friends about daily life and works because uh we work day and day and can't connect with other people so I usually chat with my friends.
✓ I usually chat with my friends about daily life and work because we work day by day and can't connect with other people, so I usually chat with my friends.
“already chat”用法不当,应使用“usually chat”表示习惯动作;“works”应为不可数名词“work”;“day and day”应为“day by day”,表示逐日。
× Actually, both of them might do. We have a WeChat group with my college classmate classmates and we usually chat with only one friend, usually with my high school.
✓ Actually, both of them might do. We have a WeChat group with my college classmates and we usually chat with only one friend, usually from my high school.
“classmate classmates”重复,应为“classmates”;“with my high school”表达不完整,应改为“from my high school”。
× Usually I prefer to communicate fast for fares because I think face to face communication can improve my uh communication skills. It's better than UH connect on the on the Internet.
✓ Usually I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face-to-face communication can improve my communication skills. It's better than connecting on the Internet.
“communicate fast for fares”表达错误,应为“communicate face to face”;“UH connect on the on the Internet”应改为“connecting on the Internet”,动词形式和介词使用错误。
× It's seldom like this. I think we need a tolerant attitude with friends in daily life or communication, uh, which is, uh, most important is happy with.
✓ It seldom happens like this. I think we need a tolerant attitude with friends in daily life or communication, which is, uh, the most important thing to be happy with.
“It's seldom like this”表达不完整,应为“It seldom happens like this”;“most important is happy with”结构混乱,应改为“the most important thing to be happy with”。