Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, and I think chatting can make us become more closer to each other because we can share our emotions, our experiences together.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well to be honest we chat about almost everything such as ups and downs at work, some personal issues or even the affairs around us. I think what really matters is not we talk what we talk about, but that we are showing care for each other.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, definitely I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think group chat is some kind of superficial and I am a kind of introverted person so it's hard for me to open up myself freely in front of group people. But with one friend it's more easy for me to.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I am all for face to face conversations because if we use social media to communicate with each other all the time, it's easy to cause some misunderstandings between US and also too much use of social media may set the distance between us.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, sometimes we disagree, especially when we see things differently, but I don't think it really matters if both sides are respectful and open minded.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但存在语法错误,如“more closer”应为“closer”,且句子结构稍显简单。建议注意语法准确性,并尝试使用更丰富的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps us become closer by sharing our emotions and experiences.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且有逻辑,但部分表达不够地道,如“not we talk what we talk about”应调整为“not what we talk about”。建议注意句子结构的自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Well, to be honest, we chat about almost everything, such as the ups and downs at work, personal issues, or even current events. However, what really matters is not what we talk about, but that we show care for each other.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了个人偏好,但存在语法和用词错误,如“some kind of superficial”应为“somewhat superficial”,“more easy”应为“easier”。建议加强语法准确性和词汇使用。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer chatting with only one friend because group chats can be somewhat superficial, and as an introverted person, it's easier for me to open up one-on-one.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但存在语法错误,如“between US”应为“between us”,且句子稍显冗长。建议简化句子结构并注意大小写。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face conversations because relying on social media too much can lead to misunderstandings and create distance between us.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁且表达清晰,逻辑连贯。建议可以增加一些具体例子或细节,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes we disagree, especially when we have different opinions, but as long as we remain respectful and open-minded, it doesn't really matter.
× Yes I do, and I think chatting can make us become more closer to each other because we can share our emotions, our experiences together.
✓ Yes I do, and I think chatting can make us become closer to each other because we can share our emotions and our experiences together.
“more closer”是错误的比较级用法,形容词“close”的比较级是“closer”,不需要加“more”。应直接使用“closer”。
× Yes I do, and I think chatting can make us become more closer to each other because we can share our emotions, our experiences together.
✓ Yes I do, and I think chatting can make us become closer to each other because we can share our emotions and our experiences together.
在列举多个名词时,应该用连词“and”连接,而不是用逗号分隔。
× Well to be honest we chat about almost everything such as ups and downs at work, some personal issues or even the affairs around us.
✓ Well, to be honest, we chat about almost everything, such as ups and downs at work, some personal issues, or even the affairs around us.
句子中缺少必要的逗号,导致结构不清晰。应在“Well”和“to be honest”后加逗号,并在列举项之间加逗号。
× I think what really matters is not we talk what we talk about, but that we are showing care for each other.
✓ I think what really matters is not what we talk about, but that we are showing care for each other.
“not we talk what we talk about”结构不正确,应改为“not what we talk about”。
× Well, definitely I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think group chat is some kind of superficial and I am a kind of introverted person so it's hard for me to open up myself freely in front of group people.
✓ Well, definitely I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think group chat is some kind of superficial thing and I am a kind of introverted person so it's hard for me to open up myself freely in front of group people.
“group chat is some kind of superficial”缺少名词,形容词“superficial”需要名词搭配,补充“thing”使表达完整。
× Well, definitely I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think group chat is some kind of superficial and I am a kind of introverted person so it's hard for me to open up myself freely in front of group people.
✓ Well, definitely I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think group chat is some kind of superficial thing and I am a kind of introverted person so it's hard for me to open up freely in front of a group of people.
“open up myself”用法错误,动词“open up”后不需要反身代词,且“group people”应改为“a group of people”。
× But with one friend it's more easy for me to.
✓ But with one friend it's easier for me.
“more easy”是错误的比较级用法,正确形式是“easier”。句子末尾缺少谓语,需简化为“it's easier for me”。
× I am all for face to face conversations because if we use social media to communicate with each other all the time, it's easy to cause some misunderstandings between US and also too much use of social media may set the distance between us.
✓ I am all for face-to-face conversations because if we use social media to communicate with each other all the time, it's easy to cause some misunderstandings between us and also too much use of social media may create distance between us.
“face to face”应连字符连接为“face-to-face”。“between US”中的“US”应小写为“us”。“set the distance”表达不自然,改为“create distance”。
× Yes, sometimes we disagree, especially when we see things differently, but I don't think it really matters if both sides are respectful and open minded.
✓ Yes, sometimes we disagree, especially when we see things differently, but I don't think it really matters if both sides are respectful and open-minded.
“open minded”作为形容词应连字符连接为“open-minded”。