Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免口头语和犹豫词。可以直接说喜欢面对面聊天，因为更注重隐私。

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer chatting with my friends face to face because I value my privacy more than chatting online.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用简单明了的句子，使用连接词使内容连贯，并具体说明聊天内容。

Ví dụ: I usually chat about gossip online, but when I meet friends face to face, I talk about my life goals, family, and feelings.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达偏好，并解释原因，避免重复和口头语。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations make me feel tired since I am not extroverted.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但有语法错误和口头语。建议去除多余词汇，注意语法，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Personally, I prefer face-to-face communication because we can use body language and expressions to make the conversation lively, which is missing in social media.

Gợi ý: 回答中有严重发音或拼写错误（如'rent a penis'应为'disagree'），影响理解。建议使用正确词汇，表达清晰，避免错误。

Ví dụ: Not really. I am an inclusive person, so when I disagree with my friends, I try to understand their views and discuss calmly to find common ground.

× Yeah, I like chatting to my friends more to face to face, but not really into umm, chat with uh, chat online 'cause you know I I am eager to my privacy time rather than my online time Yeah so.

✓ Yeah, I like chatting with my friends more than face to face, but I'm not really into chatting online because, you know, I value my privacy time more than my online time.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes 'chat' (base form) with 'like' and 'into', which require the '-ing' form of the verb. Also, 'more to face to face' should be 'more than face to face' to express preference. Using 'chatting' consistently after 'like' and 'into' is grammatically correct.

× This can totally divide it into two piece on the for online hours talks, talk about something umm no meaning like gossip.

✓ This can totally be divided into two parts: online talks and face-to-face talks. Online talks are about something meaningless like gossip.

'Two piece' is incorrect; the plural form 'two parts' is needed. Also, 'talks' should be plural to match 'two parts'. The sentence structure is unclear and needs to be split for clarity.

× But when it come when it comes to face to face I'm more emotional and talk about my life goals or my families or my emotions or something.

✓ But when it comes to face to face, I'm more emotional and talk about my life goals, my family, my emotions, or something.

The phrase 'when it come' is incorrect; it should be 'when it comes' (third person singular). Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' unless referring to multiple families. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and noun number.

× Definitely with only one friend's kiss and talk to a group of people.

✓ Definitely with only one friend rather than talking to a group of people.

'Friend's kiss' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'one friend'. Also, 'talk to a group of people' needs to be parallel with 'with only one friend' and corrected for clarity.

× It's totally make me, it totally makes me feel tired, exhausted, umm 'cause I'm not really extra fitted, extra fitted, extroverted, so umm, so I'm more into like chatting with 1 friend.

✓ It totally makes me feel tired and exhausted because I'm not really extroverted, so I'm more into chatting with one friend.

'It's totally make me' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it', so 'makes' is correct. Also, 'extra fitted' is incorrect; the intended word is 'extroverted'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× Hmm personally speaking, I'm prefer to communicate face to face 'cause, you know, we can use a lot of body language and expressions to, uh, to light up the atmosphere at me atmosphere when we're talking.

✓ Hmm, personally speaking, I prefer to communicate face to face because, you know, we can use a lot of body language and expressions to lighten up the atmosphere when we're talking.

'I'm prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a stative verb and does not use 'am' + verb. Also, 'to light up the atmosphere at me atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'to lighten up the atmosphere'. The sentence is corrected for modal verb usage and word choice.

× But via social media is the lack of this.

✓ But via social media, there is a lack of this.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'there is' to correctly express existence. Also, 'via social media is the lack of this' is ungrammatical; adding 'there is' and a comma improves clarity and correctness.

× Not really, because I'm a very inclusive person. When I have to rent a penis from my friends, I try to respect and understand their point of view instead of rejecting it immediately.

✓ Not really, because I'm a very inclusive person. When I have to borrow something from my friends, I try to respect and understand their point of view instead of rejecting it immediately.

The phrase 'rent a penis' is a mishearing or typo and is inappropriate. It should be 'borrow something'. Also, 'their point of view' is correct plural pronoun usage referring to 'friends'.

× For example, if it's grain about a topic, I usually listen carefully and I discuss it calmly to find a common ground.

✓ For example, if there is a disagreement about a topic, I usually listen carefully and discuss it calmly to find common ground.

'If it's grain about a topic' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'if there is a disagreement about a topic'. Also, 'a common ground' should be 'common ground' without 'a'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper idiomatic expression.