Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I like to chat with friends really much because I think this is a good way to relax myself.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Oh, it is hard to say, but I usually chat with my friends about history and politics and international relationships.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because we can focus on our own topics. We can just concentrate on what we said and we don't need to worry about anything else.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because it is very convenient for us to focus on the topic and secondly, face to face talk enables us to to consider their body language which is really helpful during our conservation conversation.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I sometimes argue my friends because we usually have different ideas and we want to figure out something true. So we usually spend many times in arguing to distinguish which answer is the correct one.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,表达不够自然,"really much"用法不地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and unwind after a busy day.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为笼统,缺少具体细节,且句子结构较简单。建议增加具体例子,并用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about topics like history, politics, and international relations because we all find these subjects fascinating and enjoy sharing our opinions.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但表达略显重复,缺少连接词。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows us to focus on our own topics and concentrate fully on the conversation without distractions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇,表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性,使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us focus on the topic, and we can also observe body language, which makes the conversation more effective.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 表达存在语法错误和用词不当,如"argue my friends"应为"argue with my friends"。句子结构较为简单,建议加强语法和词汇的准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions, and we want to find out the truth. These discussions often help us understand each other better.
× I like to chat with friends really much because I think this is a good way to relax myself.
✓ I like to chat with friends very much because I think this is a good way to relax myself.
这里'really much'用法不正确,应该用'very much'来表达'非常喜欢','very much'是固定搭配。
× I usually chat with my friends about history and politics and international relationships.
✓ I usually chat with my friends about history, politics, and international relations.
'international relationships'应改为'international relations',这是固定搭配,且列举多个内容时应使用逗号分隔。
× We can just concentrate on what we said and we don't need to worry about anything else.
✓ We can just concentrate on what we say and we don't need to worry about anything else.
这里时态应保持一致,'what we said'应改为'what we say',因为是在描述通常的行为。
× I prefer to communicate face to face because it is very convenient for us to focus on the topic and secondly, face to face talk enables us to to consider their body language which is really helpful during our conservation conversation.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is very convenient for us to focus on the topic and secondly, face-to-face talk enables us to consider their body language which is really helpful during our conversation.
'face to face'作为形容词时应用连字符'face-to-face','to to'是重复错误,应删去一个'to','conservation'应为'conversation',拼写错误。
× I sometimes argue my friends because we usually have different ideas and we want to figure out something true.
✓ I sometimes argue with my friends because we usually have different ideas and we want to figure out something true.
动词'argue'后面应加介词'with'表示与某人争论,缺少'with'导致用法错误。
× So we usually spend many times in arguing to distinguish which answer is the correct one.
✓ So we usually spend a lot of time arguing to distinguish which answer is the correct one.
'many times'用法不当,应该用'a lot of time'表示花费大量时间,且'arguing'前不需要介词'in'。