Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends because it allow me to share interesting stories about my daily life. We're often talking about topics we both like, actually playing videos and doing sports. I think span time in this way is very enjoyable and help strengthen our friendship.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
What were you sure Chatting about what interesting things we have done during the day or if anyone has any plans for the weekend. For example, we often discuss activities that we can do together, like going to movies and having dinner. Sometimes we're also talking about how my job work schedule during busy days.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
What I'm prefer to chat with you only one friend for time, because if you would have too many people in speaking same time you can not have gather the gist of it and also didn't have difficult to share you information in Group chatting.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer communicating through social media because it's more convenient, we can chat with each other in terms and anywhere which other worry about distance. However, when I want to have a deeper conversation or meeting close friends.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Why do not open up with my friend? Because we're usually sure our opinions come and respect each other's view. Even we have different ideas, we try to discuss them without hurting each other's feelings. This way our friendship stays strong and peaceful.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的原因,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如"allow"应为"allows","span time"应为"spend time"。建议注意动词单复数一致和词汇准确性,同时避免冗余,保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share interesting stories about my daily life. We often talk about topics we both like, such as playing video games and doing sports. Spending time this way is very enjoyable and helps strengthen our friendship.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题,如开头句子不完整且混乱。建议直接回答问题,使用清晰的句子结构,并用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about interesting things we have done during the day or our plans for the weekend. For example, we often discuss activities we can do together, like going to the movies or having dinner. Sometimes, we also talk about my work schedule during busy days.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构,直接表达偏好,并用连接词说明原因,避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: I prefer to chat with only one friend at a time because when there are too many people speaking, it's hard to follow the main points and share information clearly in group chats.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不完整,表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并用连接词衔接句子,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Well, I prefer communicating through social media because it's more convenient; we can chat anytime and anywhere without worrying about distance. However, when I want to have a deeper conversation, I prefer meeting close friends face-to-face.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议直接回答问题,使用正确的句子结构,表达尊重和沟通的重要性,并用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: I don't usually argue with my friends because we respect each other's opinions. Even when we have different ideas, we discuss them calmly without hurting each other's feelings. This helps keep our friendship strong and peaceful.
× Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends because it allow me to share interesting stories about my daily life.
✓ Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share interesting stories about my daily life.
主语是单数it,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式allows,而不是allow。
× We're often talking about topics we both like, actually playing videos and doing sports.
✓ We often talk about topics we both like, actually playing videos and doing sports.
这里描述的是习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时talk而不是现在进行时are talking。
× I think span time in this way is very enjoyable and help strengthen our friendship.
✓ I think spending time in this way is very enjoyable and helps strengthen our friendship.
动词help的主语是单数spending time,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数helps。
× What were you sure Chatting about what interesting things we have done during the day or if anyone has any plans for the weekend.
✓ We are usually chatting about interesting things we have done during the day or if anyone has any plans for the weekend.
句子结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语,且时态不正确。应调整为完整句子,使用一般现在时描述习惯动作。
× Sometimes we're also talking about how my job work schedule during busy days.
✓ Sometimes we also talk about my work schedule during busy days.
短语中“how my job work schedule”不合适,应改为“my work schedule”,且时态用一般现在时talk。
× What I'm prefer to chat with you only one friend for time, because if you would have too many people in speaking same time you can not have gather the gist of it and also didn't have difficult to share you information in Group chatting.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend at a time, because if there are too many people speaking at the same time, you cannot gather the gist of it and also have difficulty sharing your information in group chatting.
代词使用错误,如you改为I,you information改为your information;句子结构混乱,需调整语序和表达。
× Well, I prefer communicating through social media because it's more convenient, we can chat with each other in terms and anywhere which other worry about distance.
✓ Well, I prefer communicating through social media because it's more convenient; we can chat with each other anytime and anywhere without worrying about distance.
短语“in terms and anywhere which other worry about distance”不合适,应改为anytime and anywhere without worrying about distance。
× However, when I want to have a deeper conversation or meeting close friends.
✓ However, when I want to have a deeper conversation or meet close friends, I prefer face-to-face communication.
句子不完整,缺少主句,需补充完整表达。
× Why do not open up with my friend? Because we're usually sure our opinions come and respect each other's view.
✓ Why would I not open up with my friends? Because we usually share our opinions and respect each other's views.
代词使用错误,缺少主语,表达不清晰,需调整为完整句子并正确使用代词。
× Even we have different ideas, we try to discuss them without hurting each other's feelings.
✓ Even if we have different ideas, we try to discuss them without hurting each other's feelings.
缺少连词if,导致句子不完整,需加上if构成条件状语从句。