Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love chatting with my friends. I think it's a good way to interact with friend and contribute good interaction, and it's also a good way to recharge me and, uh, opportunity to, to know about uh from my friends and enhance our friendship.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
When I chatting with my friends, I really share her my own life and ask her some question about her life. How about recently and then we will have the topic about our mutual friends and we will make plans to the next time to meeting all the outside plan.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with my own friends. I just like to talk with a group of people because you have paid more attention about what you say. If you language is a fine some people, but if I choose to only one friend is is very reflexing and you can talk more deepen about your topic.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate with my friend face to face because it's give us some body language and eye connections. But it's very hard in this time. We usually use social media but if I have choice I prefer to choose the community face to face.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had argued with my friends one time but I almost forgotten why we have the argue but it's not affect our friendship. We still we still the best friend to each other. So I I'm not afraid to but argue with friend I I think it's a good relationship to repeal our friends.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,且有重复和填充词。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and strengthens our friendship by sharing experiences and feelings.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,缺少连贯的逻辑和具体细节。建议练习正确的时态和句子结构,使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: When I chat with my friends, I usually talk about our recent experiences, ask about their lives, discuss mutual friends, and plan activities to do together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱,语法和词汇使用错误较多,逻辑不清晰。建议简化表达,明确观点,并用连接词组织句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations, unlike group chats where you need to be more careful with your words.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题,且句子结构重复。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to read body language and maintain eye contact. However, due to current difficulties, we often use social media instead.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不连贯且有重复。建议练习正确的时态和句子结构,避免重复,表达观点时更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have argued with my friends before, but I don't remember the reason. It didn't affect our friendship because we are still very close. I believe arguing can help improve relationships.
× I think it's a good way to interact with friend and contribute good interaction, and it's also a good way to recharge me and, uh, opportunity to, to know about uh from my friends and enhance our friendship.
✓ I think it's a good way to interact with friends and contribute good interaction, and it's also a good way to recharge me and, uh, an opportunity to, to know about uh from my friends and enhance our friendship.
friend 应该用复数形式 friends,因为这里指的是多个朋友。
× When I chatting with my friends, I really share her my own life and ask her some question about her life.
✓ When I am chatting with my friends, I really share with her my own life and ask her some questions about her life.
动词进行时需要用 am/is/are + 动词ing形式,且 share 后面需要加介词 with,question 应该用复数 questions。
× When I chatting with my friends, I really share her my own life and ask her some question about her life.
✓ When I am chatting with my friends, I really share with her my own life and ask her some questions about her life.
share 后面需要加介词 with,表示“与某人分享”;question 应该用复数形式 questions。
× and then we will have the topic about our mutual friends and we will make plans to the next time to meeting all the outside plan.
✓ and then we will have topics about our mutual friends and we will make plans for the next time to meet all the outside plans.
have the topic 应改为 have topics,make plans 后面用介词 for,to meeting 应改为 to meet。
× and then we will have the topic about our mutual friends and we will make plans to the next time to meeting all the outside plan.
✓ and then we will have topics about our mutual friends and we will make plans for the next time to meet all the outside plans.
topic 和 plan 应该用复数形式 topics 和 plans,因为指多个话题和计划。
× When I chatting with my friends, I really share her my own life and ask her some question about her life.
✓ When I am chatting with my friends, I really share with her my own life and ask her some questions about her life.
share 后面需要加介词 with,表示“与某人分享”;question 应该用复数形式 questions。
× I prefer to chat with my own friends. I just like to talk with a group of people because you have paid more attention about what you say.
✓ I prefer to chat with my own friends. I just like to talk with a group of people because you have to pay more attention to what you say.
pay attention 后面搭配介词 to,且时态应为一般现在时 have to pay。
× If you language is a fine some people, but if I choose to only one friend is is very reflexing and you can talk more deepen about your topic.
✓ If your language is fine with some people, but if I choose only one friend it is very relaxing and you can talk more deeply about your topic.
your language,fine 后面加介词 with,reflexing 应为 relaxing,deepen 应用副词 deeply。
× If you language is a fine some people, but if I choose to only one friend is is very reflexing and you can talk more deepen about your topic.
✓ If your language is fine with some people, but if I choose only one friend it is very relaxing and you can talk more deeply about your topic.
your 代替 you,it 代替 is is,修正代词错误。
× I prefer to communicate with my friend face to face because it's give us some body language and eye connections.
✓ I prefer to communicate with my friend face to face because it gives us some body language and eye contact.
face to face 是固定短语,give 应用第三人称单数形式 gives,eye connections 应改为 eye contact。
× I prefer to communicate with my friend face to face because it's give us some body language and eye connections.
✓ I prefer to communicate with my friend face to face because it gives us some body language and eye contact.
主语 it 是第三人称单数,谓语动词 give 应该加 s 变为 gives。
× Yes, I had argued with my friends one time but I almost forgotten why we have the argue but it's not affect our friendship.
✓ Yes, I argued with my friends one time but I almost forgot why we had the argument but it didn't affect our friendship.
过去时态中,had argued 改为 argued,forgot 是 forget 的过去式,have the argue 应改为 had the argument,not affect 应改为 didn't affect。
× We still we still the best friend to each other.
✓ We are still the best friends to each other.
缺少系动词 are,friend 应用复数 friends。
× So I I'm not afraid to but argue with friend I I think it's a good relationship to repeal our friends.
✓ So I'm not afraid to argue with friends. I think it's a good way to repair our friendship.
句子结构混乱,but 多余,friend 应用复数 friends,repeal 用错,应为 repair friendship。