Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm very happy to talking with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and exciting because my friend is very humorous and interesting. They also tell me some gossip and when we study.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I chat with my friend basically every day. I think because I'm a person who like talk with others and if I don't chat with them I feel very empty and answers.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I was the parents but I think most of the time I like to chat with only one friend because talk with a troop is need to spend too much of time and I think she will only need one friendly really because.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I prefer to communicate via social media because in media I can send some picture and emoji which clear express my mind.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Basically no because I'm a people who love to follow the friends idea and my amitya is IFP so I don't have too much own ideas so I always.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“to talking”应为“to talk”,且句子结构不够清晰,表达重复且不连贯。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. They are humorous and interesting, and we often share stories and study together.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“like talk”应为“like to talk”,且句子不完整,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,使用完整句子,并提供具体内容。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, school, and hobbies. Talking with them makes me feel connected and happy.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱且语法错误严重,句子不完整且难以理解。建议先明确表达自己的偏好,再给出理由,使用简单清晰的句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because group conversations can take too much time and are less personal.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但有语法错误,如“which clear express”应为“which clearly express”。建议注意语法准确性,并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer communicating via social media because I can send pictures and emojis, which clearly express my feelings.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误严重,表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题,说明原因,并使用正确的语法。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I usually agree with their ideas and prefer to keep the peace.
× Yes, I'm very happy to talking with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and exciting because my friend is very humorous and interesting.
✓ Yes, I'm very happy to talk with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and excited because my friends are very humorous and interesting.
动词不定式to后面应接动词原形,不能用动名词形式。'exciting'应改为形容词'excited'来描述感受。'friend'应为复数形式,因为后文提到多个朋友。
× Yes, I'm very happy to talking with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and exciting because my friend is very humorous and interesting.
✓ Yes, I'm very happy to talk with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and excited because my friends are very humorous and interesting.
这里提到多个朋友,friend应使用复数friends,主谓一致。
× They also tell me some gossip and when we study.
✓ They also tell me some gossip when we study.
句中'and'连接部分不完整,且'gossip'是不可数名词,不用复数。去掉'and'使句子完整。
× I chat with my friend basically every day.
✓ I chat with my friends basically every day.
通常和多个朋友聊天,使用复数friends更合适。
× I think because I'm a person who like talk with others and if I don't chat with them I feel very empty and answers.
✓ I think because I'm a person who likes to talk with others and if I don't chat with them I feel very empty and anxious.
'like'第三人称单数应加-s,'talk'前应加to构成不定式,'answers'用词不当,应为'anxious'表示感受。
× I was the parents but I think most of the time I like to chat with only one friend because talk with a troop is need to spend too much of time and I think she will only need one friendly really because.
✓ I was with my parents but I think most of the time I like to chat with only one friend because talking with a group needs to spend too much time and I think I only really need one close friend.
'was the parents'表达错误,应为'was with my parents';'talk'应改为动名词'talking';'is need to spend'语法错误,应为'needs to spend';'troop'用词不当,应为'group';'friendly'应为'nice friend'或'close friend'。
× Honestly, I prefer to communicate via social media because in media I can send some picture and emoji which clear express my mind.
✓ Honestly, I prefer to communicate via social media because on social media I can send some pictures and emojis which clearly express my mind.
介词'in media'应为'on social media';'picture'和'emoji'应使用复数形式;'clear'应为副词'clearly'修饰动词。
× Honestly, I prefer to communicate via social media because in media I can send some picture and emoji which clear express my mind.
✓ Honestly, I prefer to communicate via social media because on social media I can send some pictures and emojis which clearly express my mind.
'picture'和'emoji'应使用复数形式,表示多个图片和表情。
× Basically no because I'm a people who love to follow the friends idea and my amitya is IFP so I don't have too much own ideas so I always.
✓ Basically no because I'm a person who loves to follow my friends' ideas and my amity is IFP so I don't have too many own ideas so I always.
'people'是复数,单数应为'person';'love'第三人称单数应加-s;'friends idea'应为'friends' ideas'表示复数所有格;'too much'用于不可数名词,'ideas'为可数名词,应使用'too many'。