Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, definitely, since it, it's a good choice to share my daily experience and, uh, get some funny story about them. What's more, I can take a break and, uh, reduce my pressure.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, we have diverse topics such as sports, movies, some stars and some someone's clothing styles. All in all, we just like to share our daily life and have a short time to.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends, if I have some secrets I prefer to share with one people, but if I have some funny stories or experiences I prefer to share with more people and recommended them to enjoy it, try it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
So actually I'm a lazy girl so I prefer to use social media because I can stay at home and sit down. Soft so far and uh umm, watching some videos in the wild, chatting with my friend.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Oh sometimes I agree with my friend about the road, food and some celebrities because I think it's so normal because everyone have different opinions and they should have their own suggestion.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语句不够流畅,有较多停顿和重复词汇,建议练习连贯表达,减少口头语,同时注意句子结构的完整性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my daily experiences and hear funny stories from them. Moreover, it helps me relax and relieve stress after a busy day.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为笼统,句子未完整结束,建议丰富细节并确保句子完整,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about various topics like sports, movies, celebrities, and fashion styles. Overall, we enjoy sharing details about our daily lives and spending some quality time together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 表达较清晰但有语法错误,如“one people”应为“one person”,建议注意单复数和时态的正确使用,同时使用连接词提升逻辑性。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I have secrets, I prefer to share them with one person. However, if I have funny stories or experiences, I like to share them with a group of friends and encourage them to enjoy or try those things.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现不连贯和无意义的词汇,表达不清晰,建议练习简洁明了的句子,避免口头语和无关内容。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because it is convenient. I can stay at home comfortably while chatting with my friends and watching videos online.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“everyone have”应为“everyone has”,且表达不够准确,建议加强语法基础并用更准确的词汇表达观点。
Ví dụ: Sometimes I argue with my friends about topics like roads, food, and celebrities. I think it's normal because everyone has different opinions and should be allowed to express their own views.
× Well, definitely, since it, it's a good choice to share my daily experience and, uh, get some funny story about them.
✓ Well, definitely, since it's a good choice to share my daily experiences and, uh, get some funny stories about them.
这里的 experience 和 story 应该用复数形式,因为表示多次经历和多个故事。
× Well, we have diverse topics such as sports, movies, some stars and some someone's clothing styles.
✓ Well, we have diverse topics such as sports, movies, some stars and some people's clothing styles.
someone's 是单数所有格,表示某个人的,语境中应使用复数所有格 people's,表示多个人的衣着风格。
× All in all, we just like to share our daily life and have a short time to.
✓ All in all, we just like to share our daily life and have a short time together.
句子末尾不完整,缺少宾语或补语,需补充完整使句子通顺。
× Well, it depends, if I have some secrets I prefer to share with one people, but if I have some funny stories or experiences I prefer to share with more people and recommended them to enjoy it, try it.
✓ Well, it depends, if I have some secrets I prefer to share with one person, but if I have some funny stories or experiences I prefer to share with more people and recommend them to enjoy it, try it.
people 是复数,表示多人,one 应该搭配单数 person。
× Well, it depends, if I have some secrets I prefer to share with one people, but if I have some funny stories or experiences I prefer to share with more people and recommended them to enjoy it, try it.
✓ Well, it depends, if I have some secrets I prefer to share with one person, but if I have some funny stories or experiences I prefer to share with more people and recommend them to enjoy it, try it.
recommended 是过去式,语境中应使用现在时 recommend,保持时态一致。
× So actually I'm a lazy girl so I prefer to use social media because I can stay at home and sit down. Soft so far and uh umm, watching some videos in the wild, chatting with my friend.
✓ So actually I'm a lazy girl so I prefer to use social media because I can stay at home and sit down. So far, I watch some videos online and chat with my friends.
原句中 'Soft so far' 无意义,应为 'So far';'in the wild' 用法不当,应为 'online';'chatting with my friend' 应为复数 friends。
× So actually I'm a lazy girl so I prefer to use social media because I can stay at home and sit down. Soft so far and uh umm, watching some videos in the wild, chatting with my friend.
✓ So actually I'm a lazy girl so I prefer to use social media because I can stay at home and sit down. So far, I watch some videos online and chat with my friends.
friend 应为复数 friends,表示和多个朋友聊天。
× Oh sometimes I agree with my friend about the road, food and some celebrities because I think it's so normal because everyone have different opinions and they should have their own suggestion.
✓ Oh sometimes I argue with my friends about the road, food and some celebrities because I think it's so normal because everyone has different opinions and they should have their own suggestions.
agree 应改为 argue,符合语境;friend 应为复数 friends;everyone 是单数,谓语动词应为 has;suggestion 应为复数 suggestions。