Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it can help me feel more relaxed and express my feeling and also that can make me feels sense of come on belongings.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
For the most of time I I I am the listener in the group, but when I chat with my friends I usually talk about my my, the recent problem like the academic or the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Absolutely chat with only one friend because I found it more comfortable to talk individual and I think it is it can reach more deep talking with one friend rather than a group of people.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
In my opinion to communicate on social media is more relaxed than face to face because I can think twice before saying and also I can send some cute sticker to express my feeling.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do argue with my friends and in my opinion, I think it is essential to have more communication with friends that let's demonstrate that you you trust this person and you can say what you want to say.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“express my feeling”应为“express my feelings”,“make me feels sense of come on belongings”表达不清且语法错误。建议简化表达,使用更自然的短语,并注意单复数和词序。
Ví dụ: Definitely, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and express my feelings. It also gives me a sense of belonging.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和不完整的句子,表达不清晰。建议避免重复,完整表达观点,并使用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Most of the time, I am a listener in the group. However, when I talk, I usually discuss recent problems, such as academic challenges or personal issues.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“talk individual”应为“talk individually”,“reach more deep talking”表达不自然。建议使用正确的词汇和语法,表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer chatting with one friend because I find it more comfortable and it allows for deeper conversations than talking in a group.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达较为清晰,但“express my feeling”应为“express my feelings”,且句子结构可以更自然。建议注意复数形式和句子流畅性。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, communicating on social media is more relaxed than face-to-face because I can think twice before replying and also send cute stickers to express my feelings.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇“you you”,句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子,避免重复,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. I believe it's important because it shows trust and allows us to express our true feelings.
× Definitely, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it can help me feel more relaxed and express my feeling and also that can make me feels sense of come on belongings.
✓ Definitely, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it can help me feel more relaxed and express my feelings and also that can make me feel a sense of belonging.
这里“feeling”应为复数形式“feelings”,表示多种感受;“feels”应改为“feel”,因为主语是“that”,单数形式;“sense of come on belongings”表达不正确,应为“a sense of belonging”,表示归属感。
× Definitely, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it can help me feel more relaxed and express my feeling and also that can make me feels sense of come on belongings.
✓ Definitely, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it can help me feel more relaxed and express my feelings and also that can make me feel a sense of belonging.
“feeling”应为复数形式“feelings”,因为这里指多种感受。
× For the most of time I I I am the listener in the group, but when I chat with my friends I usually talk about my my, the recent problem like the academic or the.
✓ For most of the time, I am the listener in the group, but when I chat with my friends I usually talk about my recent problems like academic ones or others.
“For the most of time”应为“For most of the time”,去掉多余的“the”;“my my”重复,应删除;“the recent problem”应为复数“recent problems”,因为通常不止一个问题;“like the academic or the”表达不完整,应补充完整。
× For the most of time I I I am the listener in the group, but when I chat with my friends I usually talk about my my, the recent problem like the academic or the.
✓ For most of the time, I am the listener in the group, but when I chat with my friends I usually talk about my recent problems like academic ones or others.
“problem”应为复数“problems”,因为通常有多个问题。
× Absolutely chat with only one friend because I found it more comfortable to talk individual and I think it is it can reach more deep talking with one friend rather than a group of people.
✓ Absolutely, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I find it more comfortable to talk individually and I think it can reach deeper conversations with one friend rather than a group of people.
“talk individual”应为“talk individually”,副词形式;“reach more deep talking”表达不正确,应为“reach deeper conversations”,形容词比较级和名词搭配。
× In my opinion to communicate on social media is more relaxed than face to face because I can think twice before saying and also I can send some cute sticker to express my feeling.
✓ In my opinion, communicating on social media is more relaxed than face-to-face because I can think twice before speaking and also I can send some cute stickers to express my feelings.
“to communicate on social media”应改为动名词形式“communicating on social media”;“face to face”应加连字符“face-to-face”;“before saying”应为“before speaking”;“sticker”应为复数“stickers”;“feeling”应为复数“feelings”。
× In my opinion to communicate on social media is more relaxed than face to face because I can think twice before saying and also I can send some cute sticker to express my feeling.
✓ In my opinion, communicating on social media is more relaxed than face-to-face because I can think twice before speaking and also I can send some cute stickers to express my feelings.
“sticker”应为复数“stickers”,表示多个贴纸;“feeling”应为复数“feelings”,表示多种感受。
× Yes, I do argue with my friends and in my opinion, I think it is essential to have more communication with friends that let's demonstrate that you you trust this person and you can say what you want to say.
✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends and in my opinion, I think it is essential to have more communication with friends because that demonstrates that you trust this person and you can say what you want to say.
“that let's demonstrate”表达错误,应为“because that demonstrates”,使用正确的连词和动词形式;“you you”重复,应删除一个。