Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends. I think chat can make people relax and when I watching some series I I very like to chat with my friends about the sports. And so on.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
It's about K pop stars, uh, because I have some favorite K pop groups and, uh, we must talk about, uh, the albums and uh, the photo cards. Who I like the best actually.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I actually prefer to chat with only one friend because when I face too many people, I will be nervous and uh, my brain will be blank and I don't know what I should say next minutes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate with my friends via social media because I can reply them anytime and uh, I can send some emoji, uh, it can show my real emotions.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Very little because I always the listener not uh, input some senti sentences to my friends. So it's a little times to argue with my friends because I always agree them.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“when I watching some series I I very like to chat”不符合英语语法,且内容较为模糊。建议简化句子结构,使用正确时态,并具体说明聊天内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. For example, when I watch TV series, I like to discuss the sports scenes with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有较多语气词“uh”,影响流畅性,且句子结构不够完整。建议减少语气词,使用连贯的句子,并具体描述聊天内容。
Ví dụ: I usually chat about K-pop stars because I have favorite groups. We often discuss their latest albums and collect photo cards, sharing who our favorite members are.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题,如“next minutes”应为“next”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意语法准确。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I get nervous in groups. Sometimes, I lose my train of thought and don't know what to say next.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰,但有语法错误,如“reply them”应为“reply to them”,且语气词较多。建议注意介词使用,减少语气词,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating with my friends via social media because I can reply to them anytime. Also, sending emojis helps me express my true feelings.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰,如“input some senti sentences”不明确,且“agree them”应为“agree with them”。建议使用简单句子,表达清楚自己的观点。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I usually listen carefully and avoid saying things that might cause disagreements. I tend to agree with them to keep peace.
× I think chat can make people relax and when I watching some series I I very like to chat with my friends about the sports.
✓ I think chatting can make people relax, and when I watch some series, I really like to chat with my friends about sports.
这里“chat”应使用动名词形式“chatting”表示一般活动;“when I watching”中“watching”应改为动词原形“watch”与主语“I”搭配;“the sports”中“sports”前不需要定冠词“the”。建议注意动词形式和冠词的正确使用。
× I think chat can make people relax and when I watching some series I I very like to chat with my friends about the sports.
✓ I think chatting can make people relax, and when I watch some series, I really like to chat with my friends about sports.
“watching”在此句中应为动词原形“watch”,因为前面有助动词“when I”表示一般现在时。动词形式错误导致句子不通顺。
× I think chat can make people relax and when I watching some series I I very like to chat with my friends about the sports.
✓ I think chatting can make people relax, and when I watch some series, I really like to chat with my friends about sports.
“the sports”中“sports”是复数名词,前面不需要定冠词“the”,应直接用“sports”。
× Who I like the best actually.
✓ Who I like best, actually.
“Who I like the best actually.”句子结构不完整,且“the best”位置不当,去掉“the”更符合口语表达。建议简化句子结构。
× I actually prefer to chat with only one friend because when I face too many people, I will be nervous and uh, my brain will be blank and I don't know what I should say next minutes.
✓ I actually prefer to chat with only one friend because when I face too many people, I get nervous and my mind goes blank, and I don't know what I should say in the next few minutes.
“next minutes”应改为“in the next few minutes”,表示一段时间;“my brain will be blank”更自然表达为“my mind goes blank”。注意时间表达和习惯用语。
× I prefer to communicate with my friends via social media because I can reply them anytime and uh, I can send some emoji, uh, it can show my real emotions.
✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends via social media because I can reply to them anytime, and I can send some emojis, which can show my real emotions.
“reply them”应为“reply to them”,动词“reply”后需加介词“to”;“emoji”复数形式应为“emojis”;“it can show”指代不明,改为“which can show”更清晰。
× Very little because I always the listener not uh, input some senti sentences to my friends.
✓ Very little because I am always the listener, not inputting some sentimental sentences to my friends.
缺少动词“am”;“input”用作动词时应使用动名词形式“inputting”;“senti”应为“sentimental”。句子结构不完整,需补充动词和调整词形。
× So it's a little times to argue with my friends because I always agree them.
✓ So there are few times I argue with my friends because I always agree with them.
“a little times”错误,应为“few times”;“agree”后需加介词“with”,即“agree with them”。注意数量词和介词的正确使用。