Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I very like to chat with my friends because when I have a conversation with them I can express my mood and how I feel, although they always doesn't learn as they hear what I am talking to.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Most of our conversation topic I always talk about what am I encountered now and what I am facing to. No matter it is good or bad, they can always support me when I feel sad or feel happiness.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I am prefer to chat with only one friend because when I face into a group of people I always feel nervous and cannot perfectly express what I want to talk about.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because when we talk via social media sometimes cannot let them realize what I want to talk about clearly and what my face.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
I agree with friends elderly because I am very afraid of those my friends so if we have something not have same mind I always give away to them.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的原因,但语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且句子较长且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构,注意主谓一致,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me express my feelings and moods clearly.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,且缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来使句子更连贯,并注意时态和介词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about the things I am currently experiencing because my friends always support me whether the news is good or bad.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好和原因,但有语法错误,如“am prefer”应为“prefer”,以及“face into”应为“face”。建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I often feel nervous in a group and cannot express myself clearly.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整,表达不清晰,缺少主语和连接词。建议完整表达原因,使用连接词,并注意词汇搭配,如“express my feelings clearly”。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because sometimes social media makes it hard to express my feelings and facial expressions clearly.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误严重,表达不清晰,词汇使用不当。建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇和语法结构,明确表达自己的态度。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I am afraid of conflicts, so I usually give in when we disagree.
× Yes, I very like to chat with my friends because when I have a conversation with them I can express my mood and how I feel, although they always doesn't learn as they hear what I am talking to.
✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because when I have a conversation with them I can express my mood and how I feel, although they don't always listen carefully to what I am saying.
动词后面接动名词形式(-ing)表示喜欢做某事,'like to chat'应改为'like chatting'。此外,'very like'不正确,应改为'really like'。'doesn't learn'用法错误,应该用'don't always listen',因为主语是复数。
× Most of our conversation topic I always talk about what am I encountered now and what I am facing to.
✓ Most of our conversation topics I always talk about what I am encountering now and what I am facing.
'conversation topic'应为复数形式'topics',因为指多个话题。
× Most of our conversation topic I always talk about what am I encountered now and what I am facing to.
✓ Most of our conversation topics I always talk about what I am encountering now and what I am facing.
句子结构不正确,'what am I encountered'应改为'what I am encountering',且'what I am facing to'中'to'多余,应去掉。
× No matter it is good or bad, they can always support me when I feel sad or feel happiness.
✓ No matter whether it is good or bad, they can always support me when I feel sad or happy.
'No matter it is'应改为'No matter whether it is','feel happiness'不自然,应改为'feel happy'。
× I am prefer to chat with only one friend because when I face into a group of people I always feel nervous and cannot perfectly express what I want to talk about.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I face a group of people I always feel nervous and cannot perfectly express what I want to talk about.
'I am prefer'错误,正确用法是'I prefer'。'face into a group'应改为'face a group'。
× I prefer to communicate face to face because when we talk via social media sometimes cannot let them realize what I want to talk about clearly and what my face.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when we talk via social media, sometimes they cannot clearly understand what I want to say and my facial expressions.
'cannot let them realize'表达不自然,应改为'they cannot clearly understand'。'what my face'不完整,应改为'my facial expressions'。
× I agree with friends elderly because I am very afraid of those my friends so if we have something not have same mind I always give away to them.
✓ I agree with my older friends because I am very afraid of them, so if we have different opinions, I always give in to them.
'friends elderly'应改为'my older friends'。'have something not have same mind'表达错误,应改为'have different opinions'。'give away to them'应改为'give in to them'。