Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends very much. Chatting with each other not only depends on our understanding but also refresh ourselves and keep, keep and strengthen our bonds between us.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
As we are still university student, we often talk about our study and our daily life. For example, we will talk about where we will go in at the weekend and what we ate in for dinner and lunch.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend, as chatting with only one friend can deepen our understanding with each other and we can talk something more deeply. Also we can make a strong relationship that it is good for ourselves.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer chatting with my student, my friends via social media as we go to school in different places, even different provinces, so it is hard for me to gather together with them. So via social media it is efficient.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Sometimes when we have different thoughts, we will argue with each other. However, after we find that, we can learn from their thoughts or try to talk with each other calmly and share our thoughts to improve ourselves.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达了喜欢与朋友聊天的观点,但语言不够自然,有重复词汇“keep, keep”,且句子结构较复杂,建议简化表达,避免重复,并使用更自然的连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us understand each other better and strengthens our friendship.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较具体,但存在语法错误,如“university student”应为“university students”,以及介词使用不当。建议注意语法准确性,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Since we are university students, we often talk about our studies and daily life. For example, we discuss where to go on weekends and what we ate for lunch or dinner.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构重复且有语法错误,如“talk something more deeply”不自然。建议使用更地道的表达,避免重复,并注意语法准确。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows us to understand each other better and have deeper conversations, which helps build a stronger relationship.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误,如“chatting with my student, my friends”不清晰,且句子结构不够连贯。建议简化句子,明确表达,并使用连接词提高连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating with my friends via social media because we live in different cities, so it's difficult to meet in person. Social media makes it easier and more efficient to stay in touch.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点且内容较完整,但部分表达不够自然,如“after we find that”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意句子流畅性。
Ví dụ: Sometimes we argue when we have different opinions. However, we try to stay calm, listen to each other, and learn from these discussions to improve ourselves.
× Chatting with each other not only depends on our understanding but also refresh ourselves and keep, keep and strengthen our bonds between us.
✓ Chatting with each other not only depends on our understanding but also refreshes ourselves and keeps and strengthens our bonds between us.
动词需要与主语保持一致。这里主语是第三人称单数形式的"Chatting",所以动词应使用第三人称单数形式,如"refreshes"和"keeps"。
× As we are still university student, we often talk about our study and our daily life.
✓ As we are still university students, we often talk about our studies and our daily lives.
名词复数形式使用错误。"student"应为复数"students","study"和"daily life"也应使用复数形式以匹配上下文。
× For example, we will talk about where we will go in at the weekend and what we ate in for dinner and lunch.
✓ For example, we will talk about where we will go at the weekend and what we ate for dinner and lunch.
介词使用错误。"go in at the weekend"中"in"多余,应去掉;"ate in for dinner"中"in"多余,应去掉。
× I prefer chatting with my student, my friends via social media as we go to school in different places, even different provinces, so it is hard for me to gather together with them.
✓ I prefer chatting with my students, my friends via social media as we go to school in different places, even different provinces, so it is hard for me to gather together with them.
名词复数形式错误。"student"应为复数"students",因为指的是多个朋友。
× Also we can make a strong relationship that it is good for ourselves.
✓ Also we can build a strong relationship that is good for us.
代词使用错误。"ourselves"用于反身代词,但此处应使用宾格代词"us",且"make a strong relationship"表达不自然,改为"build a strong relationship"更合适。