Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I don't like chatting with friends through social media because uh, with me is not comfortable because uh, I can't face to face with them and understand the attitude of them.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually just a power friend about schedule meeting or study or learn new things I I have just study or know through social media.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I refer to chat with only one friends because when I just break a proof of people I can't connect with them comfortably because everyone always have only idea and we can't.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Actually I refer to communicate face to face because I can when I talk with them. When I talk with them, not through social media, I can't understand your talk, your attitude and your let your body language.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, sometime, sometime I argue with friends because everyone have different ideas and we can't have the same idea to talk, to chat, to discuss discussion or anything.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều từ ngữ lặp lại như "uh". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ ngữ thừa. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng của mình.
Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy chatting with friends on social media because I find it uncomfortable. I prefer face-to-face conversations since I can better understand their expressions and attitudes.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ nội dung.
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about scheduling meetings, studying, or sharing new things we have learned through social media.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do cụ thể cho sự lựa chọn của mình.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's easier to connect and have a comfortable conversation. In a group, everyone has different ideas, which can be confusing.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lủng củng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ hơn về lý do.
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can understand the person's tone, attitude, and body language better than through social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp lại từ ngữ và làm rõ ý hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because we have different opinions and it's hard to agree on everything during our discussions.
× Honestly, I don't like chatting with friends through social media because uh, with me is not comfortable because uh, I can't face to face with them and understand the attitude of them.
✓ Honestly, I don't like chatting with friends through social media because it is not comfortable for me since I can't talk face to face with them and understand their attitude.
The phrase 'with me is not comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'it is not comfortable for me' to properly express discomfort. Also, 'face to face with them' needs the verb 'talk' or 'speak' to be grammatically correct. 'Understand the attitude of them' should be 'understand their attitude' to use the correct possessive pronoun and natural phrasing.
× I usually just a power friend about schedule meeting or study or learn new things I I have just study or know through social media.
✓ I usually just talk with friends about scheduling meetings, studying, or learning new things that I have just studied or learned through social media.
The original sentence lacks a main verb and has unclear phrases like 'a power friend' and 'schedule meeting'. The correction adds the verb 'talk' and clarifies the activities discussed. Also, 'I have just study or know' is corrected to 'I have just studied or learned' to use the correct past participle forms.
× I refer to chat with only one friends because when I just break a proof of people I can't connect with them comfortably because everyone always have only idea and we can't.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I am with a group of people, I can't connect with them comfortably since everyone always has their own idea and we can't agree.
The phrase 'only one friends' is incorrect; 'friend' should be singular. 'Break a proof of people' is unclear and corrected to 'am with a group of people'. 'Everyone always have' should be 'everyone always has' to agree in number. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Actually I refer to communicate face to face because I can when I talk with them. When I talk with them, not through social media, I can't understand your talk, your attitude and your let your body language.
✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can understand better when I talk with them. When I talk with them, not through social media, I can't understand their speech, attitude, and body language.
'I refer to communicate' should be 'I prefer to communicate'. The phrase 'I can when I talk with them' is incomplete and corrected to 'I can understand better when I talk with them'. 'Your talk' and 'your let your body language' are incorrect; they should be 'their speech' and 'body language' to refer to others and use correct nouns.
× Yeah, sometime, sometime I argue with friends because everyone have different ideas and we can't have the same idea to talk, to chat, to discuss discussion or anything.
✓ Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends because everyone has different ideas and we can't have the same idea to talk about, chat about, discuss, or anything else.
'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Everyone have' should be 'everyone has' for subject-verb agreement. The phrase 'have the same idea to talk, to chat, to discuss discussion' is awkward; corrected to 'have the same idea to talk about, chat about, discuss' for proper verb-preposition combinations and clarity.