Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I want to get some knowledge or ask my school daddy so I chat with my friends to get the assignments. It is very easy and convenient for.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, usually when I want to get some knowledge or support, so I chat me with my friends to find data about assignments of my university and it is very easy and convenient way for us to find some knowledge.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer to chat with a group of people because when more people talk to each other, they share their life experience and we learn a lot of things from there and it is very convenient and helpful way for us to share their experience and I also prefer to all to chat.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer to communicate via social media because we talk anyone through social media at any time at any place to open our mobile phone and it is very helpful and convenient way for us as.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I argue with friends when we talk to each other in our WhatsApp group and all of the shared their experience and we learn a lot of things from their experiences and I also prefer to all.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, explain why you like chatting with friends in a natural way and keep your answer concise.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share ideas and get support with my school assignments. It's a convenient way to learn from each other.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about the topics you discuss with friends.
Ví dụ: Usually, I chat with my friends about university assignments and share information to help each other. This way, we can easily find useful data and support one another.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lengthy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repeating the same ideas. Provide a clear reason why you prefer group chats.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows us to share different life experiences and learn from each other, which is very helpful.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words.
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to talk to anyone anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly whether you argue and explain briefly why, using clear sentences and linking words.
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends in our WhatsApp group when we have different opinions, but we usually learn from each other's experiences.
× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I want to get some knowledge or ask my school daddy so I chat with my friends to get the assignments. It is very easy and convenient for.
✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I want to get some knowledge or ask my school teacher, I chat with my friends to get the assignments. It is very easy and convenient.
The phrase 'ask my school daddy' is incorrect; 'school daddy' is not a proper term. It should be 'school teacher' or a similar appropriate noun. Also, the sentence ends with 'convenient for' which is incomplete and incorrect. It should end simply with 'convenient.' The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary and breaks sentence flow.
× Well, usually when I want to get some knowledge or support, so I chat me with my friends to find data about assignments of my university and it is very easy and convenient way for us to find some knowledge.
✓ Well, usually when I want to get some knowledge or support, I chat with my friends to find data about assignments at my university, and it is a very easy and convenient way for us to find some knowledge.
The phrase 'chat me with my friends' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun 'me' is unnecessary and wrong here. The correct form is 'chat with my friends.' Also, 'assignments of my university' is better expressed as 'assignments at my university.' The sentence also needs an article before 'very easy and convenient way.'
× Well, I prefer to chat with a group of people because when more people talk to each other, they share their life experience and we learn a lot of things from there and it is very convenient and helpful way for us to share their experience and I also prefer to all to chat.
✓ Well, I prefer to chat with a group of people because when more people talk to each other, they share their life experiences and we learn a lot of things from them. It is a very convenient and helpful way for us to share experiences, and I also prefer to chat with everyone.
The phrase 'I also prefer to all to chat' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'I also prefer to chat with everyone.' 'Life experience' should be plural 'life experiences' because multiple experiences are shared. 'From there' is vague; 'from them' is clearer. Also, 'helpful way' needs an article 'a.'
× Well, I prefer to communicate via social media because we talk anyone through social media at any time at any place to open our mobile phone and it is very helpful and convenient way for us as.
✓ Well, I prefer to communicate via social media because we can talk to anyone through social media at any time and any place by opening our mobile phones, and it is a very helpful and convenient way for us.
The phrase 'we talk anyone' is incorrect; it should be 'we can talk to anyone.' The phrase 'to open our mobile phone' is awkward; it should be 'by opening our mobile phones.' Also, 'helpful and convenient way' needs the article 'a.' The sentence ends abruptly with 'for us as' which is incomplete and should be removed.
× Yes, I argue with friends when we talk to each other in our WhatsApp group and all of the shared their experience and we learn a lot of things from their experiences and I also prefer to all.
✓ Yes, I argue with friends when we talk to each other in our WhatsApp group, and all of them share their experiences. We learn a lot from their experiences, and I also prefer to include everyone.
The phrase 'all of the shared their experience' is incorrect; it should be 'all of them share their experiences.' The phrase 'I also prefer to all' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'I also prefer to include everyone' or similar. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' when referring to multiple instances.