Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do chatting with my friends, umm, sometimes still uh. Make some jokes, or maybe we need to talk about our job. Or maybe, umm, sometimes we plan to go.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat with my friends about a game, uh, because lately I playing some game. If you know about Roblox, we discuss about it and then we also have a plan together to go some places.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Actually, I prefer only one friend, but I'm not uh. A quiet person, so more often I choose one friend to talk about with and maybe if I need a group I can do that too.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
If the person that close to me, I'd rather to talk with face to face instead of a social media because, uh, it's feel more personal for me and then it makes me very close to her.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course, I did argue with my friends too. I think it's very general to argue with friends because we sometimes have different opinions and as long as we can. Oh, what is it called?
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang lancar dan mengandung pengulangan serta kata pengisi seperti 'umm' dan 'uh'. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik, serta hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan langsung ke inti jawaban.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often share jokes, discuss our jobs, and sometimes plan outings together.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengulangan kata 'about'. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih tepat dan menghindari pengulangan kata yang sama. Selain itu, gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about games, especially Roblox, which I've been playing recently. We also make plans to visit different places together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat jeda yang mengganggu. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih lancar dan jelas, serta gunakan struktur yang tepat untuk menyampaikan preferensi Anda.
Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer chatting with just one friend because I'm a quiet person. However, I can also enjoy group conversations when needed.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Hindari kata pengisi seperti 'uh' dan perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif.
Ví dụ: If the person is close to me, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal and helps strengthen our relationship.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda terputus dan tidak lengkap, serta terdapat kata pengisi yang mengganggu. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lengkap dan jelas, serta hindari jeda yang tidak perlu.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because we have different opinions. However, we always try to resolve our disagreements quickly.
× Yes, I do chatting with my friends, umm, sometimes still uh.
✓ Yes, I do chat with my friends, umm, sometimes still uh.
The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. 'Do chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'do chat'.
× I usually chat with my friends about a game, uh, because lately I playing some game.
✓ I usually chat with my friends about a game, uh, because lately I have been playing some games.
The phrase 'lately I playing' is incorrect because it lacks the auxiliary verb 'have been' for present perfect continuous tense to indicate an action happening recently. Also, 'some game' should be plural 'some games' to match the context.
× If you know about Roblox, we discuss about it and then we also have a plan together to go some places.
✓ If you know Roblox, we discuss it and then we also have a plan together to go to some places.
The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'go some places' needs the preposition 'to' before 'some places' to be grammatically correct.
× Actually, I prefer only one friend, but I'm not uh. A quiet person, so more often I choose one friend to talk about with and maybe if I need a group I can do that too.
✓ Actually, I prefer only one friend, but I'm not uh a quiet person, so more often I choose one friend to talk with and maybe if I need a group I can do that too.
The phrase 'talk about with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'talk with'. Also, the period after 'uh' is unnecessary and breaks the sentence.
× If the person that close to me, I'd rather to talk with face to face instead of a social media because, uh, it's feel more personal for me and then it makes me very close to her.
✓ If the person is close to me, I'd rather talk face to face instead of using social media because, uh, it feels more personal for me and then it makes me very close to her.
'I'd rather' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'that close' should be 'is close' to form a correct relative clause. 'It's feel' should be 'it feels'. 'A social media' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and does not need an article.
× Of course, I did argue with my friends too.
✓ Of course, I have argued with my friends too.
The use of 'did argue' is grammatically correct but sounds unnatural in this context. The present perfect 'have argued' is more appropriate to express experience up to now.