Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better flow. For example, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar issues.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, but it depends on the situation. If I have exciting news to share quickly, I prefer calling. However, during my leisure time or at night, I usually text to avoid making noise.

Gợi ý: Your answer is detailed and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using more varied linking words and slightly more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas to keep it concise.

Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about their well-being and recent updates in their lives. Because some live in different time zones, I prefer messaging to calling, as it's hard to find a suitable time for both of us. Additionally, we discuss everyday topics like work and hobbies when there's nothing urgent.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your preference but is somewhat repetitive and wordy. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure for clarity and naturalness.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for clearer and more personal conversations. Some topics, like secrets or sensitive matters, are better discussed privately rather than in a group chat.

Gợi ý: Your answer is well-structured and clear. To improve, you could use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases to enhance fluency and coherence.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because, as an extrovert, I find it easier to express myself and connect with others in person. Moreover, being able to read body language helps me respond more naturally, making conversations more engaging and meaningful.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar phrases and improve grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I argue with my friends if they are making poor decisions that could lead to negative consequences. I believe it's a real friend's responsibility to speak up for their well-being.

× If I am in any excitement or I have such kind of news which should be delivered really quick then I do calling.

✓ If I am excited or have news that should be delivered really quickly, then I make a call.

The phrase 'do calling' is incorrect; the verb 'do' should not be followed by the gerund 'calling' in this context. Instead, use 'make a call' to express the action of calling. Also, 'in any excitement' is awkward; 'excited' is the correct adjective form. 'Really quick' should be 'really quickly' as an adverb modifying the verb.

× But in my leisure time or at night I prefer chatting to avoid any kind of noise.

✓ But in my leisure time or at night, I prefer chatting to avoid any noise.

The phrase 'any kind of noise' is wordy; 'any noise' is more natural. Also, a comma is needed after 'at night' to separate clauses properly.

× I usually chat with my friends about how they are doing and what's new in their lives.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about how they are doing and what is new in their lives.

The contraction 'what's' is acceptable in speech but in formal writing, 'what is' is preferred for clarity.

× Since some of my friends live in different time zones, I often send messages instead of calling because it's difficult to find a convenient time for both of us.

✓ Since some of my friends live in different time zones, I often send messages instead of calling because it is difficult to find a convenient time for both of us.

Contractions like 'it's' are acceptable in speech but in formal writing, 'it is' is preferred for clarity.

× Whenever I don't have anything urgent to discuss, then I do chat instead of calling.

✓ Whenever I don't have anything urgent to discuss, I chat instead of calling.

The phrase 'do chat' is unnecessary; the auxiliary 'do' is not needed here. Simply use 'I chat' to express the habitual action.

× I would say I prefer chatting with only one friend because I can discuss more clearly because there are some things that we cannot discuss in a group chat or some personal things or secrets which can only be texted with one friend.

✓ I would say I prefer chatting with only one friend because I can discuss more clearly; there are some things that we cannot discuss in a group chat, such as personal matters or secrets, which can only be shared with one friend.

The sentence is long and repetitive; breaking it up improves clarity. 'Texted with one friend' is awkward; 'shared with one friend' is better. Also, 'or some personal things or secrets' is redundant; 'such as personal matters or secrets' is clearer.

× So yes, I do prefer a chatting with one friend instead of with group of people.

✓ So yes, I do prefer chatting with one friend instead of with a group of people.

The article 'a' is missing before 'group of people'. Also, 'a chatting' is incorrect; 'chatting' is a gerund and does not need an article here.

× I definitely prefer communicating face to face because as an extrovert person, I find it easier to express myself and connect with others in person.

✓ I definitely prefer communicating face-to-face because, as an extroverted person, I find it easier to express myself and connect with others in person.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. 'Extrovert person' is better expressed as 'extroverted person'. A comma is needed after 'because' to separate clauses.

× Talking directly allows me to read body language of the other person and respond more naturally, which makes the conversations more engaging and meaningful.

✓ Talking directly allows me to read the body language of the other person and respond more naturally, which makes the conversations more engaging and meaningful.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'body language' because it refers to a specific body language of the other person.

× Well, it totally depends on situation.

✓ Well, it totally depends on the situation.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'situation' because it refers to a specific situation.

× Sometimes yes, I do argue with my friends when they are doing something wrong and which would not have any good results in the future.

✓ Sometimes, yes, I do argue with my friends when they are doing something wrong that will not have good results in the future.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used; 'that' is appropriate for defining clauses. Also, 'any good results' is better as 'good results' for clarity.

× So it is for their good that I argue with them because it's a duty of a real friend to stop when our friends doing something wrong and which could have negative impacts.

✓ So it is for their good that I argue with them because it is the duty of a real friend to stop our friends when they are doing something wrong that could have negative impacts.

The phrase 'it's a duty' should be 'it is the duty' to specify the duty. The clause 'to stop when our friends doing something wrong' is incorrect; it should be 'to stop our friends when they are doing something wrong'. The relative pronoun 'which' should be 'that' for defining clauses.