Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they are very funny and interesting and I can learn a lot from their experiences. If I have problems or feel stressed, they always help me and can help me and feel happier.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually tried many things with my friends. I can share my life with my friends, what interesting happened in my school life or what achievements I have, but also I will share my problems with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to have a more focused and meaningful conversation. When I talk to group, there are many different opinions, which can sometimes be confusing, but with one friend, I feel that they listen attentively and I can share my experience more openly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Sometimes I will argue with my friends. Because friends always have different opinions and if the opinions are commercial and we will have argument but after the argument we often have more clear conversation with each other. Help me understand each other better.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复表达,如“they always help me and can help me”,建议避免冗余,语言更自然流畅。可以适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they are funny and interesting, and I can learn a lot from their experiences. Moreover, when I feel stressed or have problems, they always support me and help me feel better.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当('I usually tried'应为'I usually try'),且表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题,使用正确时态,并用连接词丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about my daily life with my friends, such as interesting events at school and my achievements. Besides, I also share any problems I face with them.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但有语法错误,如“talk to group”应为“talk to a group”。建议注意冠词使用,保持语言准确。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to have a more focused and meaningful conversation. When I talk to a group, there are many different opinions, which can sometimes be confusing. However, with one friend, I feel they listen attentively and I can share my experiences more openly.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,未直接回应问题,缺乏内容和细节。建议给出完整句子并说明理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal and I can understand emotions better through body language.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如“if the opinions are commercial”不明确,句子结构不完整。建议使用连贯句子,明确表达观点。
Ví dụ: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, after the argument, we usually have clearer conversations, which help us understand each other better.
× I usually tried many things with my friends.
✓ I usually try many things with my friends.
这里的时间状语是“usually”,表示习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时,而不是过去时。
× If I have problems or feel stressed, they always help me and can help me and feel happier.
✓ If I have problems or feel stressed, they always help me and make me feel happier.
原句中“can help me and feel happier”结构不清晰,且“feel happier”缺少主语,应改为“make me feel happier”表示使我感到更快乐。
× When I talk to group, there are many different opinions, which can sometimes be confusing,
✓ When I talk to a group, there are many different opinions, which can sometimes be confusing,
“talk to group”缺少冠词,应该是“talk to a group”,表示“和一群人说话”。
× Because friends always have different opinions and if the opinions are commercial and we will have argument but after the argument we often have more clear conversation with each other.
✓ Because friends always have different opinions, and if the opinions are conflicting, we will have arguments, but after the argument we often have clearer conversations with each other.
原句中“commercial”用词错误,应为“conflicting”(冲突的);句子缺少逗号分隔,且“argument”应为复数“arguments”,形容词“more clear”应为比较级“clearer”。