Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
I love chatting with my friend because they are funny and interesting. I feel so enjoyable with them.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We usually check about the gossip in our school because so many fun things in our school happening every day.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to check with one friends, but in the real life we usually check with a group because there have so many friends, so many common friends in here.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I love to communicate face to face with my friends because when I face to face to them I can watch their mood and I think it is natural to be with them.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Sometimes I will argue with my friend but usually we use one day to figure out and we will fix it in one day because we don't want to have distance to each other so we usually quickly fix it.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"my friend"应为复数"my friends",且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并注意语法一致性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they are funny and interesting. I always feel happy when I talk with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中"check about the gossip"表达不自然,且句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about the latest gossip at school because many interesting things happen every day.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中多处语法错误,如"check with one friends"应为"chat with one friend",且句子不连贯。建议简化句子,注意单复数和时态。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's more personal, but usually I chat with a group since I have many friends in common.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但有重复和语法错误,如"face to face to them"。建议简化表达,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating face-to-face with my friends because I can see their expressions, which feels more natural.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够流畅,语法和用词有误,如"use one day to figure out"。建议使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but we usually resolve our issues within a day because we don't want to be distant from each other.
× I love chatting with my friend because they are funny and interesting.
✓ I love chatting with my friends because they are funny and interesting.
这里“friend”是单数,但后面用的是复数代词“they”,表示复数,应该将“friend”改为复数形式“friends”,保持主谓一致。
× I feel so enjoyable with them.
✓ I feel so happy with them.
“enjoyable”是形容词,表示“令人愉快的”,不能用来描述人的感受,应该用“happy”或“enjoy”来表达“我感到开心”。
× We usually check about the gossip in our school because so many fun things in our school happening every day.
✓ We usually talk about the gossip in our school because so many fun things happen every day in our school.
“check about”用法错误,应该用“talk about”表示“谈论”;“so many fun things in our school happening”缺少谓语动词,改为“so many fun things happen”。
× I prefer to check with one friends, but in the real life we usually check with a group because there have so many friends, so many common friends in here.
✓ I prefer to chat with one friend, but in real life we usually chat with a group because there are so many friends, so many common friends here.
“one friends”中“one”表示单数,后面应接单数名词“friend”;“check”用法不当,应为“chat”;“there have”应为“there are”;“in here”应简化为“here”。
× I love to communicate face to face with my friends because when I face to face to them I can watch their mood and I think it is natural to be with them.
✓ I love to communicate face to face with my friends because when I am face to face with them I can see their mood and I think it is natural to be with them.
“face to face”是固定短语,不能加“to”后面;“face to face to them”应改为“am face to face with them”;“watch their mood”用词不当,应为“see their mood”。
× Sometimes I will argue with my friend but usually we use one day to figure out and we will fix it in one day because we don't want to have distance to each other so we usually quickly fix it.
✓ Sometimes I will argue with my friends but usually we use one day to figure it out and we will fix it in one day because we don't want to have distance from each other so we usually quickly fix it.
“argue with my friend”应为复数“friends”以匹配上下文;“figure out”后缺少宾语,补充“it”;“have distance to each other”应为“have distance from each other”。