Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and grammatical errors, such as repeating 'and' and unclear pronoun use ('her'). Try to be more concise and precise, for example, say 'chatting with friends helps strengthen our relationship and lets me learn more about their daily lives.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps strengthen our relationship and allows me to learn more about their daily lives.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear vocabulary ('Hobbit' likely meant 'hobbies') and grammatical mistakes. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, provide more specific details to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: We usually chat about our hobbies or recent songs we've listened to. For example, my favorite singer just released a new song, and I recommended it to my best friend.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats phrases and has some incomplete sentences. Try to avoid repetition and complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one person because I enjoy having deep conversations. When there are many people, I tend to hold back my thoughts.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains unclear phrases ('share my. Moon') and grammatical errors. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your ideas. Also, explain why you prefer social media with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because I can use different emojis to express my feelings, which makes chatting more fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer has minor grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to use correct articles and plural forms, and provide a more complete explanation with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different opinions on certain topics, such as music.

× I like chatting with my friends because I think it can improve our relationship and and allow me to know more about her daily life and.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I think it can improve our relationship and allow me to know more about her daily life.

The sentence contains a repeated conjunction 'and and' and ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and'. Removing the extra 'and' and the final 'and' corrects the sentence structure and improves clarity.

× I like chatting with my friends because I think it can improve our relationship and and allow me to know more about her daily life and.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I think it can improve our relationship and allow me to know more about their daily life.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect because it refers to a singular female, but 'friends' is plural. Using 'their' correctly matches the plural noun and maintains pronoun agreement.

× We usually chat about umm our Hobbit or the song we listened recently, umm for example my very idol just just have a new song and I recommend to my best friend.

✓ We usually chat about umm our hobbies or the songs we listened to recently, umm for example my very idol just just has a new song and I recommend it to my best friend.

The word 'Hobbit' is incorrect; it should be 'hobbies' to match the context. 'Song' should be plural 'songs' to agree with 'we listened'. The verb 'have' should be 'has' for third person singular. Also, 'recommend' needs an object 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× my very idol just just have a new song

✓ my very idol just just has a new song

The subject 'my very idol' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.

× I recommend to my best friend.

✓ I recommend it to my best friend.

The verb 'recommend' requires a direct object. Adding 'it' clarifies what is being recommended.

× I prefer to I prefer chat with only one person because I like to have deep talk with one person and I think if there are many people I will.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because I like to have deep talks with one person and I think if there are many people I will not.

The phrase 'I prefer chat' is missing the infinitive 'to' before 'chat'. Also, 'deep talk' should be plural 'deep talks' to sound natural. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'not' completes the thought.

× I think if there are many people I will.

✓ I think if there are many people, I will not share much of my thoughts.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding the missing part 'not share much of my thoughts' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning.

× I prefer chat while social media because I can use distinct emoji to share my. Moon, and it is funny.

✓ I prefer to chat via social media because I can use distinct emojis to share my mood, and it is funny.

The phrase 'I prefer chat' should be 'I prefer to chat' using the infinitive form. 'While social media' is incorrect; 'via social media' is appropriate. 'Emoji' should be plural 'emojis' to match the context. 'Moon' is a typo for 'mood'.

× I can use distinct emoji to share my. Moon, and it is funny.

✓ I can use distinct emojis to share my mood, and it is funny.

The word 'emoji' should be plural 'emojis' because it refers to multiple symbols. Also, 'Moon' is a typo and should be 'mood'.

× Yes, sometimes we will have a argument because we have different opinion on one thing, such as. A song.

✓ Yes, sometimes we will have an argument because we have different opinions on one thing, such as a song.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'argument'. 'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'we have'. The period after 'such as' is incorrect and should be removed.