ChattingPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like chatting with friends?

Thí sinh

Absolutely. In my opinion, chatting with my friends can improve our friendship. Especially we have a lot of interests to chat about. For example, we like to chat about some interesting movies or academics.

Giám khảo

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Thí sinh

Well, I usually chat about the same video games we all played and we also like to talk about some interesting things and our own opinions about some interesting things happened in our school. Also we like to talk about some movies.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Thí sinh

Half and half maybe. Sometimes I want to chat with a group of people because I need to socialize some people who I need to know which can help me to do my works more easily.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Thí sinh

Absolutely face to face because I think if I can communicate with others face to face, I can learn or understand what their meanings through their words, emotions and especially I can look at their face or eyes when we are talking.

Giám khảo

Do you argue with friends?

Thí sinh

Absolutely not. I think there are not a lot of things or some serious problems I need to argue with my friends. And of course I think if we argued with each other, our friendship might be damaged and even be destroyed.

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Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子结构稍显重复,且部分表达不够简洁。建议避免冗余,使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it strengthens our bond. We often discuss shared interests, such as interesting movies and academic topics, which keeps our conversations engaging.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富但表达重复且不够连贯。建议使用连接词连接观点,避免重复词汇,提升表达的逻辑性和流畅度。

Ví dụ: I usually talk about video games that we all play, interesting events at school, and share our opinions on these topics. Additionally, we enjoy discussing movies we have recently watched.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够明确,句子结构混乱,表达不够自然。建议明确表达偏好,使用更清晰的句子结构,并补充具体原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer both, depending on the situation. Sometimes, I enjoy group chats because they help me meet new people, which can be beneficial for my work.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整且表达清晰,但句子较长且略显重复。建议适当拆分句子,使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand others better through their words, emotions, and facial expressions, especially eye contact.

Do you argue with friends?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构重复且部分表达不够简洁。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词,使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe serious conflicts can harm our friendship. Maintaining harmony is important to me.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Especially we have a lot of interests to chat about.

Especially we have a lot of interest to chat about.

“interest”在这里是不可数名词,表示兴趣爱好,不能用复数形式“interests”。

Past tense issue

× Well, I usually chat about the same video games we all played and we also like to talk about some interesting things and our own opinions about some interesting things happened in our school.

Well, I usually chat about the same video games we all play and we also like to talk about some interesting things and our own opinions about some interesting things happening in our school.

句子描述的是通常发生的事情,应该用一般现在时“play”,而不是过去时“played”。“things happened”应改为“things happening”,用现在分词表示正在发生的事情。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Sometimes I want to chat with a group of people because I need to socialize some people who I need to know which can help me to do my works more easily.

Sometimes I want to chat with a group of people because I need to socialize with some people whom I need to know, which can help me do my work more easily.

“socialize”后面需要加介词“with”。“people who I need to know”应改为“people whom I need to know”,更符合正式语法。短语“do my works”应为“do my work”,work通常不可数。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Absolutely face to face because I think if I can communicate with others face to face, I can learn or understand what their meanings through their words, emotions and especially I can look at their face or eyes when we are talking.

Absolutely face to face because I think if I can communicate with others face to face, I can learn or understand their meanings through their words, emotions and especially I can look at their faces or eyes when we are talking.

“what their meanings”应改为“their meanings”,去掉多余的“what”。“face”应使用复数“faces”,因为指的是多个人的脸。

Past tense issue

× And of course I think if we argued with each other, our friendship might be damaged and even be destroyed.

And of course I think if we argue with each other, our friendship might be damaged and even be destroyed.

这里是假设句,表示将来可能发生的情况,条件从句应使用一般现在时“argue”,而不是过去时“argued”。

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