Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really like to chatting with friends because it's easy way to talk or share our thoughts to another people. Like in today's era everyone knows the technology so we don't have much time to go in person or share our views or something. So I like really do chattings.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Usually I like to chat with friends like how's my day, what I did in the day and I wanna know about another person also. So these kind of things I really enjoy. Like sometimes I have vacations where I will go with them like this kind of decisions.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer do a chat with a group of people because at that time I have AI have a couple of thoughts or couple of ideas from them. Because sometimes we don't know our our another person also don't have much thought so a group of people is more joyful instead of only one person.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer do chatting on social media because as today sira always people have a work or so busy schedule, so when we have a free time we can do chatting in the bus, in our work everywhere. So it's a easy way to share our thoughts or know the first person.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Umm, yeah, yes, it's true that we are doing so much argues with our friends. Sometimes we have like a polite way, not uh, like in uh, angry way. Sometimes I have another thought, my friend have another thought. So I wanna I want to make them equal or yeah.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I really like chatting with friends because it's an easy way to share our thoughts." Also, keep your answer concise and clear, avoiding repeated ideas.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it's an easy way to share our thoughts, especially nowadays when technology makes in-person meetings difficult.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Focus on structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use more precise vocabulary and avoid informal phrases like "wanna."
Ví dụ: I usually chat with friends about how my day went and ask about theirs. Additionally, we discuss plans for vacations or activities we might do together.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like "I have AI have a couple of thoughts." Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different ideas and makes the conversation more enjoyable than talking to just one person.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Work on grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Avoid unclear words like "sira" and use linking words to connect ideas logically.
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because people are often busy, and it's convenient to chat anytime, whether on the bus or at work.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve grammar. Provide a clear, structured answer with linking words to explain your point.
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends, but usually in a polite way because we have different opinions and I try to understand their point of view.
× Yes, I really like to chatting with friends because it's easy way to talk or share our thoughts to another people.
✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it's an easy way to talk or share our thoughts with other people.
The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' rather than the infinitive 'to chatting'. Also, 'easy way' needs the article 'an' before it, and 'share our thoughts to another people' should be 'share our thoughts with other people' because 'share' is followed by 'with' and 'other' is the correct adjective here.
× Yes, I really like to chatting with friends because it's easy way to talk or share our thoughts to another people.
✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it's an easy way to talk or share our thoughts with other people.
The phrase 'easy way' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it because 'easy' starts with a vowel sound.
× Yes, I really like to chatting with friends because it's easy way to talk or share our thoughts to another people.
✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it's an easy way to talk or share our thoughts with other people.
The verb 'share' is correctly followed by the preposition 'with' rather than 'to'. Also, 'another people' is incorrect; 'other people' is the correct phrase.
× So I like really do chattings.
✓ So I really like chatting.
The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'chatting' without 'do' or plural 'chattings'. 'Chattings' is not a correct plural form.
× Usually I like to chat with friends like how's my day, what I did in the day and I wanna know about another person also.
✓ Usually I like chatting with friends about how my day was, what I did during the day, and I want to know about other people as well.
After 'like', the gerund form 'chatting' is preferred. Also, 'how's my day' should be 'how my day was' to be grammatically correct. 'Another person' should be 'other people' to refer generally.
× Usually I like to chat with friends like how's my day, what I did in the day and I wanna know about another person also.
✓ Usually I like chatting with friends about how my day was, what I did during the day, and I want to know about other people as well.
The pronoun 'another person' is incorrect here; 'other people' is appropriate when referring to people in general.
× So these kind of things I really enjoy.
✓ So these kinds of things I really enjoy.
The phrase 'these kind of things' should be 'these kinds of things' because 'these' is plural and must agree with 'kinds'.
× So these kind of things I really enjoy.
✓ So these kinds of things I really enjoy.
'These' is plural, so it should be followed by the plural noun 'kinds'.
× Like sometimes I have vacations where I will go with them like this kind of decisions.
✓ Sometimes I have vacations when I go with them to make these kinds of decisions.
'Like' is unnecessary here. 'Where' is better replaced with 'when' for time reference. 'This kind of decisions' should be 'these kinds of decisions' to match plural form.
× Like sometimes I have vacations where I will go with them like this kind of decisions.
✓ Sometimes I have vacations when I go with them to make these kinds of decisions.
'This kind of decisions' is incorrect; 'these kinds of decisions' is the correct plural form.
× I prefer do a chat with a group of people because at that time I have AI have a couple of thoughts or couple of ideas from them.
✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because at that time I get a couple of thoughts or ideas from them.
After 'prefer', the infinitive 'to chat' is correct. 'Do a chat' is incorrect. Also, 'I have AI have' seems to be a typo; 'I get' is appropriate here.
× Because sometimes we don't know our our another person also don't have much thought so a group of people is more joyful instead of only one person.
✓ Because sometimes we don't know, and other people also don't have many thoughts, so a group of people is more enjoyable than just one person.
'Our our another person' is incorrect; 'other people' is appropriate. 'Much thought' should be 'many thoughts' for countable plural. 'Joyful' is better replaced with 'enjoyable' in this context.
× I prefer do chatting on social media because as today sira always people have a work or so busy schedule, so when we have a free time we can do chatting in the bus, in our work everywhere.
✓ I prefer chatting on social media because nowadays people always have work or busy schedules, so when we have free time we can chat on the bus, at work, or anywhere.
After 'prefer', the gerund 'chatting' is correct. 'Do chatting' is incorrect. 'As today sira' is unclear and replaced with 'nowadays'. 'A work' should be 'work' without article. 'In our work' should be 'at work'.
× I prefer do chatting on social media because as today sira always people have a work or so busy schedule, so when we have a free time we can do chatting in the bus, in our work everywhere.
✓ I prefer chatting on social media because nowadays people always have work or busy schedules, so when we have free time we can chat on the bus, at work, or anywhere.
The prepositions 'in the bus' and 'in our work' are incorrect; the correct prepositions are 'on the bus' and 'at work'.
× So it's a easy way to share our thoughts or know the first person.
✓ So it's an easy way to share our thoughts or get to know the person first.
'A easy way' should be 'an easy way' because 'easy' starts with a vowel sound. 'Know the first person' is unclear and corrected to 'get to know the person first'.
× Umm, yeah, yes, it's true that we are doing so much argues with our friends.
✓ Umm, yeah, yes, it's true that we argue a lot with our friends.
'Doing so much argues' is incorrect; the verb 'argue' should be used in simple present tense 'we argue' and 'a lot' is the correct quantifier.
× Umm, yeah, yes, it's true that we are doing so much argues with our friends.
✓ Umm, yeah, yes, it's true that we argue a lot with our friends.
'So much argues' is incorrect because 'argues' is a verb, not a noun. The correct phrase is 'argue a lot'.
× Sometimes we have like a polite way, not uh, like in uh, angry way.
✓ Sometimes we have a polite way, not an angry way.
The phrase 'have like a polite way' is informal and redundant; 'have a polite way' is clearer. Also, 'not uh, like in uh, angry way' is better simplified to 'not an angry way'.
× Sometimes I have another thought, my friend have another thought.
✓ Sometimes I have one thought, and my friend has another thought.
'My friend have' is incorrect; it should be 'my friend has' for third person singular. Also, adding 'and' improves sentence structure.
× Sometimes I have another thought, my friend have another thought.
✓ Sometimes I have one thought, and my friend has another thought.
The verb 'have' must agree with the third person singular subject 'my friend', so it should be 'has'.
× So I wanna I want to make them equal or yeah.
✓ So I want to make them equal or something like that.
'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is preferred. The phrase 'or yeah' is unclear and replaced with 'or something like that' for clarity.