Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容有些冗长。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，同时保持内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends a lot. I am an extroverted person and have many friends at school. I often chat with them during breaks or online when we are apart. I really miss talking to them when we are not together.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够清晰，表达重复且语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并且组织句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually chat about many things with my best friend Shirley. For example, we often talk about our favorite anime series. We enjoy discussing the characters and their stories, especially the tragic parts that make the story interesting.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清楚，语法和句子结构有较多错误。建议简化表达，明确观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because in a group, it is hard to speak often. When I talk to one person, they can respond to my feelings better and the conversation is more personal.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有待改进。建议注意时态一致，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, I am an extroverted person, so I prefer face-to-face communication. Social media does not allow me to physically interact with my friends or hang out with them, so face-to-face meetings make me feel more comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，注意单词拼写和语法，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: No, I rarely argue with my friends because I am a peaceful person. It is hard to make me angry. If we have a quarrel, I usually apologize first to resolve the issue.

× Yeah, I'm really a extrovert person that I makes a lot of friends in my school, so every time I will chat with my friends even in the classroom when I have lessons and I usually chat with friends with in the other place through the Internet.

✓ Yeah, I'm really an extroverted person who makes a lot of friends in my school, so every time I chat with my friends even in the classroom when I have lessons, and I usually chat with friends in other places through the Internet.

这里“a extrovert person”中冠词使用错误，应为“an extroverted person”，且“extrovert”应改为形容词“extroverted”修饰“person”。“that I makes”中“that”应改为关系代词“who”，且“makes”应与主语“I”一致改为“make”。“with in the other place”中“with in”应为“in”，“the other place”应为复数“other places”。

× A lot of things such as Shirley is my best friend and we will chatter about some animes work that we love it.

✓ A lot of things, such as Shirley, who is my best friend, and we will chat about some anime works that we love.

“chatter”用法不当，应为“chat”。“animes work”应为“anime works”，且“anime”不可数时通常不加复数。句子结构不清晰，需加逗号和关系代词“who”使句子通顺。

× We all love this work.

✓ We all love this work.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× So we have many common topics about these characters, some character life while very tragic, tragic and I love that story.

✓ So we have many common topics about these characters; some characters' lives are very tragic, and I love that story.

“some character life while very tragic”结构不完整，应改为“some characters' lives are very tragic”。“tragic, tragic”重复，应去掉重复。

× I would like to chat with one friend because when you chatting with a lot of people you might have a less chance to speak out because they always just one by one you talk of that.

✓ I would like to chat with one friend because when you are chatting with a lot of people, you might have less chance to speak out since they always talk one by one.

“when you chatting”缺少助动词，应为“when you are chatting”。“a less chance”中“a”不应出现，应为“less chance”。“they always just one by one you talk of that”语序混乱，改为“they always talk one by one”。

× I'm talk that but one friend they will response you that you're feeling.

✓ I'm talking about that, but one friend will respond to you and understand your feelings.

“I'm talk that”应为“I'm talking about that”。“they will response you that you're feeling”中“response”应为动词“respond”，且“that you're feeling”表达不清，应改为“and understand your feelings”。

× Just to what I mentioned, I am extroverted person so I preferred face to face method because via social media I can't touch with my friends, we even cannot hang out together.

✓ Just as I mentioned, I am an extroverted person, so I prefer face-to-face communication because via social media I can't touch my friends, and we cannot even hang out together.

“Just to what I mentioned”应为“Just as I mentioned”。“I preferred”时态错误，应为一般现在时“prefer”。“extroverted person”前缺冠词“an”。“touch with my friends”中“touch”不及物，去掉“with”。

× So face to face let me feel more comfortable.

✓ So face-to-face communication makes me feel more comfortable.

“face to face”应连写为“face-to-face”作形容词使用。句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充“communication makes”。

× No, I never argue with my friends because I'm a really peaceful friend.

✓ No, I never argue with my friends because I'm a really peaceful person.

“peaceful friend”表达不自然，改为“peaceful person”更合适。

× It's hard to let me angry about one thing every time.

✓ It's hard to make me angry about anything.

“let me angry”用法错误，应为“make me angry”。“about one thing every time”表达不自然，改为“about anything”。

× If we have a quar quarrels I will apologize first I think.

✓ If we have a quarrel, I will apologize first, I think.

“quar quarrels”重复，应为单数“quarrel”。句子缺少逗号，需加以分隔。