Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because most of my friends works in the same field as me. We can bounce around idea about how to advance our teaching career this environment to come up with new ideas to.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We really talk about the daily life math friends, such as the trending topic on social media. Uh, funny and interesting things happened recently. We'll also talk about trending.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friends because we can have hard to hard conversation which help strengthen our friendship. Although chatting with a group people can spark my imagination and brimstone but I can be uncomfortable.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I like both imposing Richard bring a sense of a sense or or or sensitivity because we can have air contact and observe facial expression.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about trending topic on social media. The argument can get quite hard, but eventually we usually just agree to disagree.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的原因,但语法错误较多,且表达不够连贯。建议注意主谓一致,避免语法错误,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because most of them work in the same field as me. Therefore, we can exchange ideas on how to advance our teaching careers and come up with new strategies together.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体且有语法和表达错误,句子不完整。建议明确表达聊天内容,避免重复和语法错误,使用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about daily life topics, such as trending news on social media, funny incidents, and interesting things that happened recently.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如'hard to hard conversation'和'brimstone'。建议使用正确表达,注意单复数和词汇选择,句子结构更清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because we can have heart-to-heart conversations that strengthen our friendship. Although group chats can inspire creativity, I sometimes feel uncomfortable in large groups.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且有大量语法和表达错误,影响理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点,使用正确词汇和句子结构。
Ví dụ: I like both face-to-face communication and social media. Face-to-face allows us to make eye contact and observe facial expressions, which helps understanding.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整且表达清楚,但可以使用更多连接词和丰富词汇,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about trending topics on social media. Although the arguments can become intense, we usually agree to disagree in the end.
× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because most of my friends works in the same field as me.
✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because most of my friends work in the same field as me.
这里的主语是复数形式的“friends”,谓语动词应该用复数形式“work”,而不是单数“works”。主谓一致错误。
× We can bounce around idea about how to advance our teaching career this environment to come up with new ideas to.
✓ We can bounce around ideas about how to advance our teaching career in this environment to come up with new ideas too.
“idea”应为复数形式“ideas”,因为这里指多个想法。同时,句中缺少介词“in”来连接“this environment”,并且“to”应为“too”表示“也”。
× We really talk about the daily life math friends, such as the trending topic on social media.
✓ We really talk about daily life with friends, such as trending topics on social media.
“math friends”应为“with friends”,且“topic”应为复数“topics”,因为通常讨论多个话题。
× I prefer to chat with only one friends because we can have hard to hard conversation which help strengthen our friendship.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because we can have heart to heart conversation which helps strengthen our friendship.
“one”后面应接单数名词“friend”,而非复数“friends”。此外,“hard to hard”应为“heart to heart”,表示真诚的交流。谓语动词“help”应与单数主语“conversation”一致,改为“helps”。
× Although chatting with a group people can spark my imagination and brimstone but I can be uncomfortable.
✓ Although chatting with a group of people can spark my imagination and bring me energy, I can be uncomfortable.
“a group people”应为“a group of people”,缺少介词“of”。“brimstone”用词错误,应为“bring me energy”或类似表达。
× Although chatting with a group people can spark my imagination and brimstone but I can be uncomfortable.
✓ Although chatting with a group of people can spark my imagination and bring me energy, I can be uncomfortable.
缺少介词“of”连接“group”和“people”,导致表达不完整。
× I like both imposing Richard bring a sense of a sense or or or sensitivity because we can have air contact and observe facial expression.
✓ I like both because they bring a sense of sensitivity; we can have eye contact and observe facial expressions.
原句中“imposing Richard”无意义,可能是听写错误。应使用正确代词“they”指代前文内容。并且“air contact”应为“eye contact”,“facial expression”应为复数“facial expressions”。
× I like both imposing Richard bring a sense of a sense or or or sensitivity because we can have air contact and observe facial expression.
✓ I like both because they bring a sense of sensitivity; we can have eye contact and observe facial expressions.
“facial expression”应为复数形式“facial expressions”,因为通常观察多种表情。
× Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about trending topic on social media.
✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about trending topics on social media.
“topic”应为复数“topics”,因为通常讨论多个话题。