Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more structured and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about what you talk about with your friends.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually talk with them daily about new topics and our daily lives. For instance, we discuss our current activities and sometimes our work or business. This helps me feel better and stay connected with them.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers the topic but is repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to organize your ideas and use linking words like 'such as' or 'for example' to give specific details. Also, avoid repeating similar words like 'gossips' twice.

Ví dụ: Usually, I chat with my friends about various topics such as family news, our friend group activities, social media trends, and shopping. For example, we often share updates about our families and discuss interesting things we see online.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to express your preference clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with my best friend because I feel more comfortable. However, I also enjoy group conversations since they help me improve my communication skills and learn how to interact with different people.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and structured. Start with a clear statement of your preference, then explain with specific examples. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I enjoy both face-to-face communication and social media. At university, we mostly talk in person, which helps build strong relationships. However, on social media, we share memes and updates, which keeps us connected even when we are apart.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains filler words. Try to be more direct and clear. Explain when and why you might argue with friends, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions or moods. For example, if I disagree with their way of talking during a discussion, I might express my views. However, I think arguing is natural and helps strengthen our friendship.

× Yes, definitely I love to chat with my friend and I, I feel better talk with them on daily basis and on new topics and about daily life which we are doing in these days and what we are umm what our business or some point.

✓ Yes, definitely I love to chat with my friends, and I feel better talking with them on a daily basis about new topics and daily life, what we are doing these days, and about our business or some points.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'my friend and I' instead of 'my friends' and has awkward phrasing. 'My friend and I' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to chatting with friends, not including themselves as a friend. Also, 'feel better talk' should be 'feel better talking' to use the gerund form after 'feel better'. The phrase 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' to be 'on a daily basis'. The sentence is long and confusing; breaking it into clearer parts improves understanding.

× Usually I talk with my friends about our discussions made on about our family gossips and our friend groups gossips and about social media and about shopping, different kinds of things we discuss about in daily life.

✓ Usually I talk with my friends about our family gossip, our friend group's gossip, social media, shopping, and different kinds of things we discuss in daily life.

The phrase 'discussions made on about' is incorrect; 'discuss' is sufficient without 'made on'. Also, 'gossips' should be 'gossip' as it is uncountable. 'Friend groups gossips' should be 'friend group's gossip' to show possession. The preposition 'about' is overused and redundant; simplifying the sentence improves clarity.

× Umm for me I prefer to chat with other people also but umm best friend is for me is 1 and all.

✓ Umm for me, I prefer to chat with other people also, but my best friend is the one for me.

The phrase 'best friend is for me is 1 and all' is unclear and incorrect. '1 and all' is not proper English. It should be 'my best friend is the one for me' to indicate singular preference. Also, adding 'my' before 'best friend' is necessary for possession.

× So talking in a group which leads us to communicating with other people and which which help us to how to talk with inner group and how to sit in a group and it it also.

✓ So talking in a group leads us to communicate with other people and helps us learn how to talk within the group and how to sit in a group as well.

The sentence has repeated words 'which which' and 'it it' which are errors. The conjunction 'which' is misused; the sentence should use 'and' to connect ideas. 'Help us to how to talk' is incorrect; it should be 'helps us learn how to talk'. The phrase 'inner group' should be 'within the group' for correct preposition use.

× Umm it totally depends on uh. In our university life we talk about face to face and daily conversation and in social media we also share real memes and different type of things.

✓ Umm it totally depends. In our university life, we talk face to face and have daily conversations, and on social media, we also share real memes and different types of things.

The phrase 'talk about face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'talk face to face' without 'about'. 'Different type of things' should be 'different types of things' to agree in number. Also, 'in social media' should be 'on social media' as the correct preposition for platforms is 'on'.

× So I think both perspectives are fine for me. So I enjoy both type of communication with my friends.

✓ So I think both perspectives are fine for me. So I enjoy both types of communication with my friends.

'Both type' is incorrect; it should be 'both types' to agree in number. This is a quantifier error related to pluralization, but since 'both' implies plural, 'types' must be plural.

× Umm, it depends on uh which mood we have we are in.

✓ Umm, it depends on which mood we are in.

The phrase 'which mood we have we are in' is redundant and incorrect. The correct expression is 'which mood we are in'. The modal verb 'depends on' requires a clear object; removing redundancy improves clarity.

× So sometimes I definitely uh disagree with their talkative manner or something which we are discussing about.

✓ So sometimes I definitely disagree with their talkative manner or something we are discussing.

The phrase 'discussing about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. Also, 'their talkative manner' is acceptable but could be clearer as 'their talkative behavior'. Removing 'uh' improves fluency.