Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I enjoy the time with my friends and other relationships and when I chatting with my friend I feel relaxed and unwind and I feel we can have a good time together.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well to be honest we really chat together about TV, group programs and other music shows. We are all interested in it and I think is excited, but I find my friends interest and hobbies and sometimes we chat about our future plans, for example travel.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer to chat in a group of people because I enjoy the moment. We chat together and I think it's very interesting when I get more powerful perspective from a group of people and I feel it's very happy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well to be honest, I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it's a good way to prevent misunderstanding and through face to face communication I can better understanding my friends with their body language and facial expression.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Oh no, no, I usually umm, discuss with calm and, and uh, umm, and peaceful. I think it's a good way to maintain our relationship and uh, in, in most of the time we are uh, we agree umm, the same things and uh, to prevent, uh, argue with each other.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,句子结构不够清晰,建议简化句子,避免重复,并注意时态和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and enjoy our time together.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够连贯,存在语法错误,词汇使用不准确。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并注意主谓一致和词汇搭配。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about TV shows, music programs, and sometimes our future plans, like traveling, because we all share these interests.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不自然,词汇搭配不当,句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting in a group because it allows me to hear different opinions, which makes the conversation more interesting and enjoyable.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但存在语法错误,如动词形式和冠词使用。建议注意语法准确性,并适当丰富表达。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps prevent misunderstandings and allows me to understand my friends better through their body language and facial expressions.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中充满犹豫词和重复,表达不清晰,语法错误较多。建议减少填充词,使用完整句子表达观点,并注意语法和词汇的准确性。
Ví dụ: I usually discuss calmly and peacefully with my friends to maintain our relationship, and most of the time we agree to avoid arguments.
× when I chatting with my friend I feel relaxed and unwind
✓ when I am chatting with my friend I feel relaxed and unwind
动词进行时态需要使用助动词be加动词的-ing形式,缺少了am导致语法错误。
× I enjoy the time with my friends and other relationships
✓ I enjoy the time with my friends and other relationships
此句中'other relationships'表达不清,建议改为'other relationships'或更具体的表达,但不属于语法错误,故不改。
× I think is excited
✓ I think it is exciting
此处缺少主语it,且形容词应为现在分词形式exciting来描述事物的特性。
× I find my friends interest and hobbies
✓ I find my friends' interests and hobbies
friends的所有格应加撇号,interest应为复数形式interests,表示多个兴趣。
× when I get more powerful perspective from a group of people
✓ when I get a more powerful perspective from a group of people
缺少冠词a,且perspective为单数,需用冠词修饰。
× I feel it's very happy
✓ I feel very happy
happy是形容词,不能用it作主语,且feel后直接用形容词描述感受。
× communicate face to face
✓ communicate face-to-face
face-to-face作为副词短语,需用连字符连接。
× I can better understanding my friends with their body language and facial expression
✓ I can better understand my friends with their body language and facial expressions
can后应接动词原形understand,facial expression应为复数形式。
× argue with each other
✓ argue with each other
此处用法正确,无需修改。
× discuss with calm and, and uh, umm, and peaceful
✓ discuss calmly and peacefully
calm和peaceful是形容词,需改为副词calmly和peacefully修饰动词discuss。
× we agree umm, the same things
✓ we agree on the same things
agree后需用介词on来引出同意的内容。