Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I enjoy sharing my daily life with my friends, but most of most of my friends are in China, so I have to chat online through a very popular app called WeChat to talk with them to maintain our friendship.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat with my friends about a variety of topics such as our hobbies, personal feelings, including both happiness and sadness. Especially when we encounter difficulties, I'd like to talk to them to better understand the situation and receive emotional support. This helps me to feel more relaxed.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Personally, it depends on the situation. When something new happens, I prefer to chat with a group because I can hear different perspectives and learn from others. However, if the topic is serious or personal, I usually have a one-on-one conversation to feel more comfortable and open.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate by social media because I'm a bit introverted, so talking face to face sometimes makes me feel nervous. Also, when I chat online, I have time to think and check my messages before sending them, which makes me feel more comfortable and confident.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I rarely argue with my friends because I really cherish the friendship I have. I believe that maintaining good friendship is very important, so I try to avoid disagreements that might cause unpleasant feelings between us. Although sometimes we have different opinions, we usually talk things through calmly to keep our bones strong.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复表达“most of most of”,影响流畅性。建议避免重复,语言更自然简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy sharing my daily life with my friends. Since most of them are in China, I usually chat with them online using a popular app called WeChat to keep our friendship strong.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且有逻辑,但连接词使用较少,建议增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about various topics, such as our hobbies and personal feelings, including both happiness and sadness. Especially when we face difficulties, I like to talk to them to better understand the situation and receive emotional support, which helps me feel more relaxed.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,表达自然。可以尝试使用更多连接词提升语言流畅度。
Ví dụ: Personally, it depends on the situation. When something new happens, I prefer to chat with a group because I can hear different perspectives and learn from others. However, if the topic is serious or personal, I usually have a one-on-one conversation so that I feel more comfortable and open.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且表达清晰。可以尝试使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate via social media because I'm a bit introverted, so talking face to face sometimes makes me feel nervous. Moreover, when I chat online, I have time to think and check my messages before sending them, which makes me feel more comfortable and confident.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中“keep our bones strong”表达不自然,建议使用更贴切的表达。
Ví dụ: No, I rarely argue with my friends because I really cherish our friendship. I believe maintaining good relationships is very important, so I try to avoid disagreements that might cause unpleasant feelings. Although we sometimes have different opinions, we usually discuss them calmly to keep our friendship strong.
× Yes, I enjoy sharing my daily life with my friends, but most of most of my friends are in China, so I have to chat online through a very popular app called WeChat to talk with them to maintain our friendship.
✓ Yes, I enjoy sharing my daily life with my friends, but most of my friends are in China, so I have to chat online through a very popular app called WeChat to talk with them to maintain our friendship.
句子中出现了“most of most of my friends”的重复,属于复数使用错误。应去掉重复部分,保持句子简洁正确。
× I believe that maintaining good friendship is very important, so I try to avoid disagreements that might cause unpleasant feelings between us.
✓ I believe that maintaining good friendships is very important, so I try to avoid disagreements that might cause unpleasant feelings between us.
“friendship”在此处应使用复数形式“friendships”,因为指的是多段友谊,量词使用不当。
× Although sometimes we have different opinions, we usually talk things through calmly to keep our bones strong.
✓ Although sometimes we have different opinions, we usually talk things through calmly to keep our bonds strong.
“keep our bones strong”是错误的习语表达,正确的表达应为“keep our bonds strong”,意为保持关系牢固。此处属于习语使用错误,虽然不在列表中,但为表达准确需更正。