Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. It's a great way to share stories and catch up, and it helps us relax and relieve stress. We often cheat when we drink coffee or during meals.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
To be honest, we don't have a sad topic. We might chat about studying or working when we have some problems. Sometimes we share com amusing or interesting stories from our week and talk about our plans for the weekend. It's a great way to stay connected on each other.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to treat with only one friend because I enjoy deeper, more meaningful conversations, it's easier to focus and connected on a personal level, and I feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts with 1 friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer communicating face to face because it's easy to notice changes in the other person's modes. For example, when we talk about sad things, I can give the other person a hug and comfort her. None of this can be achieved through social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, but I think it's perfectly normal and everyone may has different views on the same thing. For example when we watch a movie, I might think the plot of this movie is not interesting, but my friend thinks the movie is well made with a compelling plot and a suitable background music.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了拼写错误("cheat"应为"chat"),且表达略显重复,建议注意单词拼写并避免冗余。可以简洁明了地表达观点,同时保持自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us share stories and relax. We often chat over coffee or meals, which strengthens our friendship.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误("com amusing"应为"some amusing","stay connected on each other"应为"stay connected with each other"),建议加强语法和词汇的准确性,避免错误影响表达。
Ví dụ: Usually, we talk about our studies or work when we face problems. Sometimes, we share some amusing stories from our week and discuss our weekend plans to stay connected with each other.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误("treat"应为"chat"),句子结构不够清晰,且缺少适当的连接词。建议注意单词拼写,使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to chat with only one friend because I enjoy deeper, more meaningful conversations. It is easier to focus and connect on a personal level, and I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体,但"modes"应为"moods",建议注意词汇准确性。可以适当增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating face to face because it's easier to notice changes in the other person's moods. For example, when we talk about sad things, I can give them a hug and comfort them, which is impossible through social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有例子,但存在语法错误("may has"应为"may have"),建议注意主谓一致和语法准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think it's perfectly normal because everyone may have different views on the same thing. For example, when we watch a movie, I might find the plot uninteresting, but my friend thinks it is well made with a compelling story and suitable background music.
× We often cheat when we drink coffee or during meals.
✓ We often chat when we drink coffee or during meals.
这里的单词“cheat”是错误的,应该是“chat”,表示聊天。虽然不是单复数错误,但根据上下文,原词用错了,属于词汇错误。此处不属于给定的语法错误类型,故不做修改。
× Sometimes we share com amusing or interesting stories from our week and talk about our plans for the weekend.
✓ Sometimes we share some amusing or interesting stories from our week and talk about our plans for the weekend.
原句中“com”应为“some”,是拼写错误,属于词汇错误,不属于给定的语法错误类型,故不做修改。
× It's a great way to stay connected on each other.
✓ It's a great way to stay connected with each other.
短语“stay connected”后应接介词“with”,表示“与……保持联系”,原句用“on”不正确,属于介词使用错误。
× I prefer to treat with only one friend because I enjoy deeper, more meaningful conversations, it's easier to focus and connected on a personal level, and I feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts with 1 friend.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I enjoy deeper, more meaningful conversations; it's easier to focus and connect on a personal level, and I feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts with one friend.
“treat with”用法错误,应为“chat with”;“connected”应为动词原形“connect”;数字“1”应写为单词“one”。这些均属于介词使用错误和动词形式错误。
× I prefer communicating face to face because it's easy to notice changes in the other person's modes.
✓ I prefer communicating face to face because it's easy to notice changes in the other person's moods.
“modes”应为“moods”,是拼写错误,属于词汇错误,不属于给定的语法错误类型,故不做修改。
× None of this can be achieved through social media.
✓ None of this can be achieved through social media.
该句中“can be achieved”使用正确,无需修改。
× Yes, but I think it's perfectly normal and everyone may has different views on the same thing.
✓ Yes, but I think it's perfectly normal and everyone may have different views on the same thing.
情态动词“may”后应接动词原形“have”,原句中“has”错误,属于情态动词用法错误。
× For example when we watch a movie, I might think the plot of this movie is not interesting, but my friend thinks the movie is well made with a compelling plot and a suitable background music.
✓ For example, when we watch a movie, I might think the plot of the movie is not interesting, but my friend thinks the movie is well made with a compelling plot and suitable background music.
“a suitable background music”中“music”是不可数名词,不应加冠词“a”,属于冠词使用错误。