Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复和语法错误，简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: I like chatting with my friends when I have enough energy and free time. It helps me relax and enjoy my day.

Gợi ý: 内容较为深刻，但表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有误。建议使用更简单准确的表达，注意语法时态和词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: Recently, I often talk with my friends about how traditional education affected our childhood and how it pressured us to follow strict rules.

Gợi ý: 回答结构不清晰，表达不连贯，有语法和词汇错误。建议先明确表达观点，再用连贯的句子支持观点，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is easier to have deep conversations. This also helps to strengthen our relationship.

Gợi ý: 表达不完整且重复，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，注意句子完整性和语法正确。

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because texting sometimes makes me feel pressured to reply immediately.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且重复，表达不流畅。建议清晰表达观点，避免重复，使用恰当词汇描述情况。

Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends, but when we have different opinions on a topic, we discuss them calmly without using harsh words.

× I like to chatting with friends or also hanging out with them.

✓ I like chatting with friends or also hanging out with them.

动词 'like' 后面接动名词形式，不能用不定式加动名词。应使用 'like chatting' 而不是 'like to chatting'。

× Recently, I usually chat with my friends about the childhood trauma which may caused by the traditional education and also the concept of pressing our mental will to obey the tradition rules.

✓ Recently, I usually chat with my friends about the childhood trauma which may be caused by traditional education and also the concept of pressing our mental will to obey traditional rules.

'may caused' 中 'caused' 应为过去分词形式 'be caused'，表示被动语态。且 'the traditional education' 和 'the tradition rules' 中冠词使用不当，应去掉定冠词。

× I prefer to chat with only A1 friend since that one is a lot of people, it's hard to discuss a deeper question.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend since when there are a lot of people, it's hard to discuss deeper questions.

'A1 friend' 应为 'one friend'，且 'that one is a lot of people' 语法错误，应改为 'when there are a lot of people'。'a deeper question' 应为复数 'deeper questions'。

× Also strengthen and doing. By doing so, it also strengthens our relationship.

✓ Also strengthening and doing so strengthens our relationship.

句子结构不完整，'Also strengthen and doing' 语法错误，应改为 'Also strengthening'，并将后句合并使表达完整。

× I prefer to communicate face to face, uh, instead of via social media instead.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face instead of via social media.

'instead' 重复使用，且 'face to face' 前不需要介词 'to'，应为 'face-to-face' 作为形容词或副词使用。

× Sometimes I had texting message.

✓ Sometimes I text messages.

'had texting message' 语法错误，'text' 作动词时应直接用现在时 'text messages'，且 'texting' 作为动名词不合适。

× It can it can increase my pressure for for the obligation I have that I have to respond message to them, but without.

✓ It can increase my pressure because of the obligation I have to respond to their messages, but sometimes I don't.

'pressure for for the obligation' 介词重复且用法错误，应改为 'pressure because of the obligation'。'respond message to them' 应为 'respond to their messages'。句尾 'but without' 不完整，应补充完整表达。

× but we are using this, uh, using disputing words.

✓ but we do not use disputing words.

'using this, uh, using disputing words' 结构混乱且表达不清，应改为否定句 'do not use disputing words'，更符合语境。