Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and keep your response concise within 5 sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, such as 'because' and 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps me feel connected, especially with those who live far away. Moreover, it relieves my stress; for instance, after a tough day at work, I call a friend to relax and share my feelings.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs better sentence structure and coherence. Avoid sentence fragments and use linking words like 'such as' or 'for example' to list topics. Also, be specific and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: I usually chat about various topics such as work, fitness, and relationships. For example, we often reminisce about our beautiful school days and share memories from that time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to focus and connect on a personal level. Therefore, I feel more comfortable sharing my personal thoughts and enjoy the conversation better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrases like 'phase of page'. Use clearer expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep sentences concise and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it makes conversations more meaningful through body language and facial expressions. This way, I can be sure the other person understands me clearly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and smoother linking words like 'although' and 'however'. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors such as 'on each other' instead of 'to each other'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often argue with my friends because we have different political views. However, these debates are usually healthy, and we offer constructive criticism to each other rather than harmful comments.

× I usually talk about everything right from work, fitness and relationship.

✓ I usually talk about everything right from work, fitness and relationships.

The word 'relationship' should be in plural form 'relationships' to match the plural context of 'work' and 'fitness'. This is a singular and plural issue, but since the problem is with the form of the noun, it is related to verb + -ing form category as per the list. However, the best fit is singular and plural issue (ID 1). Correction: 'relationships'.

× Mostly we find ourselves talking about. Our school days, how beautiful it had been.

✓ Mostly we find ourselves talking about our school days, how beautiful they have been.

The sentence has a period after 'about' which breaks the sentence incorrectly. Also, 'how beautiful it had been' is incorrect because 'it' refers to 'school days' which is plural, so 'they' should be used. Also, the tense 'had been' is past perfect which is not appropriate here; present perfect 'have been' is better to express ongoing relevance. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1) and past tense issue (ID 5).

× I actually prefer talking with one friend because it helps me focus and connect in a personal level.

✓ I actually prefer talking with one friend because it helps me focus and connect on a personal level.

The correct preposition to use with 'level' in this context is 'on' not 'in'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Yes, I prefer face to face connect communication because it makes the conversation meaningful through body language and facial expressions.

✓ Yes, I prefer face-to-face communication because it makes the conversation meaningful through body language and facial expressions.

The phrase 'face to face connect communication' is incorrect. It should be 'face-to-face communication'. Hyphens are needed in 'face-to-face' as it is a compound adjective. Also, 'connect' is unnecessary here. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word form (ID 11).

× With face to face connection, I can ensure that this person is at the right phase of page of what I am talking about.

✓ With face-to-face connection, I can ensure that this person is on the right page of what I am talking about.

The phrase 'phase of page' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'on the right page'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× We usually argue on social thoughts because we have different political ideologies.

✓ We usually argue about social issues because we have different political ideologies.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'about'. Also, 'social thoughts' is not a common phrase; 'social issues' is more appropriate. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× But I think the debates are usually healthy and we give constructive criticisms on each other than harmful ones.

✓ But I think the debates are usually healthy and we give constructive criticisms to each other rather than harmful ones.

The phrase 'on each other' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to each other'. Also, 'than' should be 'rather than' to express contrast properly. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and incorrect conjunction use (ID 16).