Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Certainly yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, mainly because I can pick their dreams and get a lot of insights. Also they are chatting with them help me on wind. So overall I I, I, I really chat, chatting with my friend is right.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Almost everything. Uh, we usually chat about our daily life and our hobbies. For example, when I find some interesting movies, I would recommend it to my friends. Uh, overall, uh, I we, we, we, we chat almost everything.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I would definitely prefer to chat with only one friend, many because. This kind of conversation help me unwind and relax. Umm, talking with only one friend can always have a deeper conversation which is more meaningful.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I prefer to communicate face to face. The main reason is that I can see the face and the the expression and the movement of the people I talk to additionally face to.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course. There are quite a lot of argues in my daily life especially. For example, we might argue a, we might disagree about what to eat and where to go, but it just argues.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够自然,存在语法错误和重复,表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me understand their dreams and gain new insights. Talking with them also helps me relax and feel supported.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有较多语气词和重复,影响流畅度。建议减少填充词,使用连词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually chat about various topics, such as our daily lives and hobbies. For instance, I often recommend interesting movies to my friends.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但存在语法错误和语气词。建议注意语法准确,减少语气词,使用连接词增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer chatting with one friend because it helps me unwind and relax. Moreover, one-on-one conversations are usually deeper and more meaningful.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够完整,存在重复和语法错误。建议简洁表达观点,避免重复,补充完整理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand them better.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇,清楚描述争吵的情况。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we disagree about things like what to eat or where to go. However, these arguments are usually minor.
× Also they are chatting with them help me on wind.
✓ Also, chatting with them helps me unwind.
原句中“are chatting”时态使用不当,且“help me on wind”表达错误,应为“helps me unwind”,表示“帮助我放松”。动词“help”后接动词原形或不带to的不定式,且主语是单数“chatting”,动词需用第三人称单数形式。
× I really chat, chatting with my friend is right.
✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends.
原句中“friend”应为复数形式“friends”,因为前文提到的是“my friends”,保持一致。
× I would recommend it to my friends.
✓ I would recommend them to my friends.
“some interesting movies”是复数,指代时应使用复数代词“them”,而非单数“it”。
× I we, we, we, we chat almost everything.
✓ We chat about almost everything.
原句中“almost everything”前缺少介词“about”,且多余的“I we, we, we, we”应删除,保持句子简洁。
× This kind of conversation help me unwind and relax.
✓ This kind of conversation helps me unwind and relax.
“This kind of conversation”是单数主语,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”。
× I prefer to communicate face to face.
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face.
“face-to-face”作为副词短语,需用连字符连接,表示“面对面地”。
× There are quite a lot of argues in my daily life especially.
✓ There are quite a lot of arguments in my daily life, especially.
“argues”是动词形式,名词应为“arguments”,表示“争论”。