Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with friends because charging make makes me relaxed. In the daily life, we can talk about the the weather, the temperature, the study and the social topic.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
They usually discuss the, uh, last news and uh, personal experience and plans for the future, which keep the interaction engaging and, uh, enjoyable. This social connection not only makes me feel supported, but also.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with a group of people because a lot of people could chat. We can have a lot of ideas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because face to face communication make the conversation lively and interesting. We can talk with the topic efficiently and the body language can make the conversation more interesting and.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I don't agree with my friends. Uh, when we have different uh, views about uh, ideas, I think we have to conversation, not argue.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复词汇,表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax. We often talk about daily topics like the weather, studies, and social issues.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有较多停顿词,句子不完整,缺乏连贯性。建议减少口头语,完整表达观点,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about the latest news, personal experiences, and future plans, which keeps our conversations engaging and enjoyable. This helps me feel supported and connected.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较简单,表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并丰富理由,使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows us to share many different ideas and makes the conversation more lively.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,句子未完成,表达重复。建议注意语法,完成句子,并避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it makes conversations more lively and interesting. Also, body language helps us understand each other better.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和口头语,表达不清晰。建议减少口头语,使用正确的语法,并清楚表达观点。
Ví dụ: No, I don't argue with my friends. When we have different opinions, I believe we should have a calm conversation instead of arguing.
× Yes, I like chatting with friends because charging make makes me relaxed.
✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because chatting makes me relaxed.
这里应使用动名词形式'chatting'而不是'charging',且主语是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'。
× In the daily life, we can talk about the the weather, the temperature, the study and the social topic.
✓ In daily life, we can talk about the weather, the temperature, study, and social topics.
'the daily life'应改为无冠词的'daily life','the the weather'重复,去掉一个'the'。'the study'和'the social topic'不需要定冠词,且'social topic'应为复数形式。
× They usually discuss the, uh, last news and uh, personal experience and plans for the future, which keep the interaction engaging and, uh, enjoyable.
✓ They usually discuss the latest news, personal experiences, and plans for the future, which keep the interaction engaging and enjoyable.
'last news'应为'latest news','personal experience'应为复数形式'personal experiences',去掉多余的逗号和'uh'。
× This social connection not only makes me feel supported, but also.
✓ This social connection not only makes me feel supported, but also makes me feel happy.
句子不完整,'but also'后应有对应的谓语和宾语,补充完整句子。
× I prefer to chat with a group of people because a lot of people could chat.
✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because many people can chat.
'could'表示过去或可能性,语境应使用一般现在时'can'。
× We can have a lot of ideas.
✓ We can have many ideas.
'a lot of'可以用,但'ideas'是可数名词,'many'更合适表达数量多。
× I prefer to communicate face to face because face to face communication make the conversation lively and interesting.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because face to face communication makes the conversation lively and interesting.
主语's face to face communication'是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'。
× We can talk with the topic efficiently and the body language can make the conversation more interesting and.
✓ We can talk about the topic efficiently, and body language can make the conversation more interesting.
'talk with the topic'应改为'talk about the topic',句子末尾不完整,去掉多余的'and'。
× No, I don't agree with my friends.
✓ No, I don't argue with my friends.
回答问题是否与朋友争吵,应使用'argue',而非'disagree',更符合语境。
× Uh, when we have different uh, views about uh, ideas, I think we have to conversation, not argue.
✓ When we have different views about ideas, I think we should have a conversation, not argue.
'have to conversation'结构错误,应为'have a conversation',且缺少情态动词'should'表达建议。