Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I like tracking with my friends, especially when my best friend called Jessica, I talked with her every day.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Are you really talking about what happened in my life every day? The people I met, the thing happened and what did I do today? We always share the things every day.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
It depends how I feel that day. If I want to talk to the group of people, I will definitely try to talk a group of people. If I want to only talk to one person and I will do that.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I think they're both work for me. If I want to talk to the people who is already here, I want to talk to them face to face. But if the people is far away, I think we only can talk to over the social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
When I was in my 20s, I used to argue with my friends over some stupid things such as small misunderstanding or differences in opinions. However, now that I'm in my 30s, I hardly ever argue with anyone because I have learned to be more patient and understanding.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当,例如“tracking”应为“chatting”,且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇,并简洁表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Jessica, whom I talk to every day.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱,句子不连贯,且重复表达。建议直接回答问题,使用连贯的句子,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about our daily lives, such as the people we met, events that happened, and what we did that day.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不够简洁自然。建议使用更流畅的句子,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer chatting with a group, while other times I like talking to just one friend.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如主谓不一致,且表达略显笨拙。建议注意语法一致性,简洁表达观点。
Ví dụ: Both ways work for me. I prefer face-to-face communication when people are nearby, but I use social media to talk to friends who are far away.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议适当增加连接词以增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: When I was in my 20s, I used to argue with my friends over small misunderstandings or differences in opinions. However, now that I'm in my 30s, I hardly ever argue because I have learned to be more patient and understanding.
× I like tracking with my friends, especially when my best friend called Jessica, I talked with her every day.
✓ I like chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Jessica, whom I talk with every day.
句中使用了过去时态“called”和“talked”,但描述的是习惯性动作,应使用一般现在时。此外,动词“tracking”应为“chatting”,意思为聊天。建议用一般现在时表达习惯动作。
× Are you really talking about what happened in my life every day? The people I met, the thing happened and what did I do today? We always share the things every day.
✓ Do you mean what happened in my life every day? The people I meet, the things that happen, and what I do today? We always share these things every day.
句子结构混乱,时态不一致。应统一使用一般现在时描述日常发生的事情,且句子应完整。
× If I want to talk to the group of people, I will definitely try to talk a group of people.
✓ If I want to talk to a group of people, I will definitely try to talk to a group of people.
介词“to”在“talk to a group of people”中是必要的,缺少导致表达不完整。
× If I want to talk to the people who is already here, I want to talk to them face to face.
✓ If I want to talk to the people who are already here, I want to talk to them face to face.
先行词“people”为复数,关系代词谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,而非单数“is”。
× But if the people is far away, I think we only can talk to over the social media.
✓ But if the people are far away, I think we can only talk over social media.
“people”为复数,谓语动词应为“are”。“talk to over the social media”结构不正确,应为“talk over social media”。
× I think they're both work for me.
✓ I think they both work for me.
“they're”是“they are”的缩写,后面接动词时不需要“are”,应直接用“they both work”。
× When I was in my 20s, I used to argue with my friends over some stupid things such as small misunderstanding or differences in opinions.
✓ When I was in my 20s, I used to argue with my friends over some stupid things such as small misunderstandings or differences in opinions.
“misunderstanding”应使用复数形式“misunderstandings”,因为指多个误会。
× such as small misunderstanding or differences in opinions.
✓ such as small misunderstandings or differences in opinions.
“misunderstanding”前缺少复数形式,表示多个误会时应使用复数。