Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, be more concise and clear by directly stating your opinion and supporting it with specific reasons. For example, mention why chatting with diverse friends is enjoyable and how it helps you relax.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to hear different perspectives. Usually, we meet at the mall to relax and relieve stress after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Focus on organizing your answer clearly and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. For instance, explain what kind of activities or goals you discuss and how sharing experiences benefits your friendship.

Ví dụ: We usually talk about our daily work and events that happened. Additionally, we discuss our future goals and share experiences from places we have visited, which helps us learn from each other.

Gợi ý: Try to improve sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, explain clearly why chatting in a group is beneficial, giving specific reasons related to culture and knowledge.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group because it exposes me to different languages and cultures. This multicultural communication broadens my knowledge and makes conversations more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain clearly why face-to-face communication is better, especially in resolving conflicts and enabling effective two-way communication.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows deeper interaction. For example, if there is an argument, it can be resolved more effectively when you see the person's expressions. Also, it enables easy two-way communication.

Gợi ý: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar. Clearly explain why arguments happen and how they can strengthen friendships when resolved properly. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions and ways of doing things. However, arguing helps us understand each other better and makes our bond stronger when we resolve our differences.

× it's nice to have different perspective and it's nice to have the chatting with friends, uh, with diverse people.

✓ it's nice to have different perspectives and it's nice to chat with friends, uh, with diverse people.

The word 'perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' because it refers to multiple viewpoints. Also, 'have the chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'chat' to correctly express the action.

× I'm talking with my friends, uh, into the, into the mall to release the stress and unwind and it's.

✓ I'm talking with my friends, uh, in the mall to relieve stress and unwind.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; 'in' is appropriate to indicate location. Also, 'release the stress' should be 'relieve stress' for natural expression.

× We used the you usually talk about our the day works and what the events, what happened on the day.

✓ We usually talk about our daily work and the events that happened during the day.

The phrase 'used the you usually talk' is incorrect and confusing; it should be 'usually talk'. Also, 'day works' should be 'daily work' and 'what the events' should be 'the events that' for clarity and correct tense.

× For example, if you we go to one places then and we have new experience then we can make it in.

✓ For example, if we go to one place and have a new experience, then we can share it.

'One places' is incorrect; 'place' should be singular. 'New experience' needs an article 'a'. The sentence is also incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× I prefer to talk with a group of people because it stimulates different language and different culture.

✓ I prefer to talk with a group of people because it stimulates different languages and cultures.

'Language' and 'culture' should be plural to match 'different' indicating variety.

× It provides us different diverse perspective in any knowledge and it is it is necessary to have multicultural communication so that you will enjoy with different people.

✓ It provides us with diverse perspectives and knowledge, and it is necessary to have multicultural communication so that you can enjoy interacting with different people.

The phrase 'provides us different diverse perspective in any knowledge' is incorrect; 'provides us with diverse perspectives and knowledge' is correct. Also, 'enjoy with' should be 'enjoy interacting with'.

× I would like to say that I prefer to talk face to face because it provides deeper interaction to the person if there's in arguing, it will resolve effectively if you face the person during communication.

✓ I would like to say that I prefer to talk face to face because it provides deeper interaction. If there is an argument, it will be resolved effectively if you face the person during communication.

The sentence has modal verb and structure issues. 'If there's in arguing' is incorrect; it should be 'If there is an argument'. Also, 'it will resolve effectively' should be 'it will be resolved effectively'.

× Aside from that, it will be you have two way communication where you can share and response easily whatever you.

✓ Aside from that, you have two-way communication where you can share and respond easily to whatever you want.

'It will be you have' is incorrect; it should be 'you have'. 'Response' is a noun; the verb form 'respond' is needed. Also, 'two way' should be hyphenated as 'two-way'.

× Yeah, at times I argue with my friends because you are two person who's having a different opinions and a style in everything that we do.

✓ Yeah, at times I argue with my friends because there are two people who have different opinions and styles in everything that we do.

'You are two person' is incorrect; it should be 'there are two people'. 'Who's having' should be 'who have' to agree with plural 'people'. 'A different opinions' is incorrect; 'different opinions' is plural without 'a'. 'A style' should be 'styles' to match plural.

× Arguing also enables us to make our band closer as we resolve the. Discussion effectively and coherently it really OK.

✓ Arguing also enables us to become closer as we resolve discussions effectively and coherently. It is really okay.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Make our band closer' is incorrect; 'become closer' is correct. 'Resolve the. Discussion' is fragmented; it should be 'resolve discussions'. The last part needs to be a complete sentence.