Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I really love uh chatting with my friend because it makes me feed a energetic and my friend always give me new uh, expand my horizon. So yes, I love.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Oh, that's good question. We often, uh, chat about like a recent job and my life and sometimes we talk about, uh, recently, uh, trend Netflix or TV.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I have never thought about that, but I think, uh, depend on the, uh, situation. Sometimes, uh, Speaking of group is good for get knowledge and if I want to, uh.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer communicate our face to face because, uh, I can see uh, their face directly and uh, uh, easy to understand their reaction. So it made me more.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
I rarely argue with my friend. Uh, but uh, when I was uh child maybe I had major argue with my friends but I don't remember.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「feed a energetic」は「feel energetic」に修正し、「my friend always give me new uh, expand my horizon」は「my friends always help me expand my horizons」のように具体的で正確な表現にしましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, of course. I really love chatting with my friends because it makes me feel energetic, and they always help me expand my horizons.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答は内容が少し曖昧で、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。例えば、「a recent job and my life」は「our recent jobs and personal lives」にし、「recently, uh, trend Netflix or TV」は「recent trends on Netflix or TV shows」に具体的に表現しましょう。
Ví dụ: That's a good question. We often chat about our recent jobs and personal lives, and sometimes we discuss recent trends on Netflix or popular TV shows.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答が未完成で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、「It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer chatting with a group because it helps me gain knowledge, but other times I prefer one-on-one conversations for deeper connection.」のように。
Ví dụ: I haven't really thought about it, but I think it depends on the situation. Sometimes, chatting with a group is good for gaining knowledge, but other times I prefer talking with one friend for a deeper conversation.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。「I prefer communicate our face to face」は「I prefer to communicate face-to-face」に修正し、「So it made me more」は意味が不明瞭なので、「So it makes communication easier and more effective」のように具体的にしましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see their facial expressions directly, which makes it easier to understand their reactions. So it makes communication more effective.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答は基本的に理解できますが、文法と語彙の誤りがあります。「major argue」は不自然なので「major arguments」にし、「when I was uh child」は「when I was a child」に修正しましょう。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends. However, when I was a child, I might have had major arguments with them, but I don't really remember.
× I really love uh chatting with my friend because it makes me feed a energetic and my friend always give me new uh, expand my horizon.
✓ I really love uh chatting with my friends because it makes me feel energetic and my friends always give me new ideas and expand my horizon.
The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the context implies more than one friend. Also, 'feed' is incorrect and should be 'feel'. Additionally, 'a energetic' is incorrect; 'energetic' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'my friend always give me new uh, expand my horizon' is ungrammatical; it should be 'my friends always give me new ideas and expand my horizon.' This correction improves subject-verb agreement and clarity.
× I really love uh chatting with my friend because it makes me feed a energetic and my friend always give me new uh, expand my horizon.
✓ I really love uh chatting with my friends because it makes me feel energetic and my friends always give me new ideas and expand my horizon.
The verb 'feed' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'feel' to express an emotional or physical state. Also, 'expand' should be connected properly to the sentence to indicate what is being expanded, such as 'expand my horizon.'
× my friend always give me new uh, expand my horizon.
✓ my friends always give me new ideas and expand my horizon.
The subject 'my friend' is singular but the verb 'give' is plural form; it should be 'gives' if singular. However, since the context suggests multiple friends, changing 'friend' to 'friends' makes 'give' correct. Also, the phrase 'expand my horizon' needs to be connected properly with 'and' to indicate two actions.
× We often, uh, chat about like a recent job and my life and sometimes we talk about, uh, recently, uh, trend Netflix or TV.
✓ We often, uh, chat about recent jobs and my life, and sometimes we talk about recent trends on Netflix or TV.
The phrase 'like a recent job' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary here. 'Recently' should be 'recent' to modify 'trends.' Also, 'trend Netflix or TV' is unclear; it should be 'trends on Netflix or TV' to indicate the platform.
× We often, uh, chat about like a recent job and my life and sometimes we talk about, uh, recently, uh, trend Netflix or TV.
✓ We often, uh, chat about recent jobs and my life, and sometimes we talk about recent trends on Netflix or TV.
'Job' should be plural 'jobs' to match the general context. Similarly, 'trend' should be plural 'trends' to indicate multiple topics.
× I prefer communicate our face to face because, uh, I can see uh, their face directly and uh, uh, easy to understand their reaction.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because, uh, I can see their faces directly and it's easier to understand their reactions.
The phrase 'prefer communicate our face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to communicate face to face.' The possessive 'our' is unnecessary. Also, 'their face' should be plural 'their faces' to match multiple people. 'Easy to understand' should be 'it's easier to understand' for grammatical correctness.
× I rarely argue with my friend.
✓ I rarely argue with my friends.
The singular 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to indicate arguments with more than one friend, which is more natural in this context.
× when I was uh child maybe I had major argue with my friends but I don't remember.
✓ When I was a child, maybe I had major arguments with my friends, but I don't remember.
The phrase 'was uh child' is missing the article 'a.' 'Major argue' is incorrect; it should be 'major arguments' (noun form). The past tense 'had' is correct here.